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قديم 17-11-2009, 11:59 PM   #8

لزيزا

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تاريخ التسجيل: Jun 2009
التخصص: لغات اوروبيه
نوع الدراسة: إنتساب
المستوى: السادس
الجنس: أنثى
المشاركات: 68
افتراضي رد: plz grils correct this paragraph for mee

My Classmate

I have a special friend called Shroug . She was my classmate in high school.
After she graduated, she became a teacher. She lived in Riyadh, and then moved to Yanbu with her family. She is exhausted, because she is raising her kids and working at the same time. She is planning to resume her studies in English Literature.



Watson And The Shark

There are many creatures living under the water. One of the hugest most known animals is the Shark. If you could imagine what happened in the painted picture, you will know it is about a group of people, who were in a rowboat at Havana's harbor in Cuba when their friend was drowning and struggling to survive from a shark's attack. First, the Shark attacked him and bit him in his leg. After that, the man tried to catch the rope but he could not reach it at all. One of his friends used a spear to kill the Shark, while the others were trying to pull up the man from the water. In the end, he made it, but he was bleeding and he was very tired from fighting with this wild animal.



بالنسبه للتانيه في اشياء كمان من وجهة نظري احس لازم تتغير عشان توصيل المعنى بس ما حبيت اغيرها عشان لا اضيع المعنى اللي انتي حاطتو

والعنوان لازم يكون في الوسط و تحتو خط و بداية البرجراف تسيبي مسافه 2 او 1 سم بس مقدر اسوي كدا هنا معرف ازبطها

وبالتوفيق يا عسل

 

توقيع لزيزا  

 



EXAMS

[E] expect the unexpected

[X] x-social life

[A] abandon relaxation

[M] major headache

[S] sleepless nights




ههههههه بالله مو تعريف كل حرف صحيح .. تأليفي ممنوع النشر نقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة

 


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