02-12-2009, 07:34 AM
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تاريخ التسجيل: Sep 2009
التخصص: English Literature
نوع الدراسة: إنتظام
المستوى: متخرج
الجنس: ذكر
المشاركات: 491
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رد: انجللللللللللللش
)الحيين ابغاكم تقولولي كتعبير صح ولا لا مو كترك فراغ في البدايه وهالشغلات ...
It's extremely excellent but how come u want to be a businesswoman then u want to work for companies and banks. Here I guess you just need to carry on supporting ur topic sentence.
2)وبس بدي جملتين كمان تزيد علييهم زي اييش مثلا خخخخ راحت الافكار مني هههههه وشكررا Well, I believe that ideas just disappear when we try to write about ourselves, right? strang!!
If I were u I would speak about previous famous businessman; his biography and how did he accomplish his goals
then give example of what are u aimig to do in the future
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