[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن embarrassed subject :) I am abdullah . I work nurse and I love alt something in my life . I love the sad music and romantic one because it make me have thinking in Many things in my live and remember a beautiful time ago . at this time I have many word in my mind and in my heart I want to Scream out loud and send emotion ,but I can not do that because I do not have a Boat to cross the ocean . I love to be alone sometimes and I most do that to spend time with myself and thinking in my sad life . I love who cry alone every time because he has a pure heart . and I hate who has harsh heart and without Mercy i hate who lier and i cannot live with him. I do not like injustice and I like kill who do it I want to write more and more but i cannot do that the truth is that I love the Boat which Brings me to the nearby island to me love I know that. you can not understand my words but it express and explain something Not known, bye bye

You hate who has harsh heart ,and you want to kill who like injustice OMG
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Look you wrote I love alot something in my live ,but I thing there is mistake in the sentence I don’t know what it is ,but I prefaer to write I love many things in my life.
You wrote It make me have thinking in many things in live ,but right one is It make me thinking in many things in my life .You wrote have but have here is wrong because when you write have you should write the subject befor have .Did you got me ???
You wrote to me love but the correct is to my love
The red color are the mistakes after correct
beautiful expresstion Abduallah