Ok, girls
Now, I will put my first deive essay, and I hope to be good.
We should write about that to practice our skills.
When I want to travel to outside I will not be confused to where I can go.
I will choose Italy directly because it is my first lovely country.
It is attracting all people to visits it; really it is an amazing country.
I cannot forget my trip to it before many years ago
It has the beautiful cities which consist of historic places.
First, I went to Rome, and I took several pictures beside
a famous Colosseum which has the beautiful Legends .
Then, I visited a great Verona which has the best love story in the world.
When I stood in the window of Juliet I imagine myself is a hero of the story.
Next, I went to the state of Tuscany. There was the world's strangest
tower. It is an italic Piza tower .There was I saw many people from
different country. They were touring inside it.
Finally, a beauty of Italy is increasing from city to another one. .
In fact , I cannot forget that a great country which
has advantages of the tourist country.
I'm excited to know my mistakes.
My questions:
1)Is my writing is deive essay or not??
2)I want to know your point of view in my writing , and your advices.
Thanks a lot in advanced
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