[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Thank you sooooooooooooo much dear Con dear I feel like I’m getting worse ,and worse in writing I’m so sad I feel like I did not offer forward even one step. Thank you dear for your intrest on us I will improve my writing more ,and more Allah willing see you soon my teacher

U see Ragad , I told u before , people are two types . that's why I don't want to correct randomly for anybody without his permission
I don't want them to be frustrated as u are now , I don't know why are u frustrated ? may be because I'm correcting for u , so when u see the red color in ur text , u feel disappointed
Ok , I'll suggest something
I will correct ur paragraph informally , so that can reduce ur mistakes , if u want
Also , as I told u before try not to make spelling mistakes at all because u r not in the exam , so u can use the dictionary or Microsoft Word to make sure of the spelling
And there is a very important point which is : TRY to adhere to what u know
ألتزمي بالشي اللي تعرفيه
Whether in the grammar or the word usage
How ??a
In the grammar , use only the grammatical rules which u know and use only the simple and continuous present and past tense . Don't use the perfect tense because u may not be capable to use it because it is the most difficult tense for the beginners
In the word usage , when u want to use a new word u have to consult the dictionary to see how they use it and which part of speech it is (adj ,verb, noun …etc) and how they put in a sentence and so on . the advisable dictionary is Oxford Dictionary as a book or http://dictionary.cambridge.org/
As an online website. U know , I always use this online dictionary when I come to correct you all , it's so useful
So don't use the new words randomly

If I remember anything I'll be back to write it for u

Good luck