[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن معليش على التصحيح علما محد طلب منى بس حبيت اتفلسف واشارك :) ابلة كون تصحيحي صح؟

thoughts….
Sometimes when you think you are the owner of this world….

both of u and Ragad are correct

You have the keys of everything …..

both are correct

You have control the people around you ….

u r wrong , why did u add HAVE?a

You know the answers of any question….

both are correct

You are the light that every person looks up to be like you ….
u r excellent

You have the happiness for the people around you …

i think Ragad's sentence is better

you the helper for everyone …
you have faith in yourself…..
Just……
one mistake from you make you will see all kinds of hated,

Excellent MashaAllah, but u need to replace (will) before MAKE so the sentence will be

one mistake from u will make u see all ....etc



Good job