[ابو فهد*]

Good morning Raghad

Thank you for your appreciation words

my feelings as yours because I got a lot of benefit from you, too

okay, let's start with your first Qs

?...How is my writing in general

I can't evaluate you but I can say my opinion only, here I have to say the truth, your writing is perfect -by what does the word mean- because you still in the beginning and you have the chance to improve your language

?...Does it need to more and more to be professional

Yes, you need to practice more of reading to achieve sentnce building

?...What is your advice to me

My advice is to avoid a literal translation

how can we say Others..? "And" the internet are such

Other benefits (plural) and we should use( are )because (are) related to other benefits not to the internet. Ok, understood? If not let me know

can we change his to their or not ...?? Coz you didn't correct it for me

Yes, and CONGRATULATIONS you passed the hidden test. I left this obvious mistake to check your intelligence


Thank you again for giving me this opportunity to help you and it is in my pleasure to exchange interests with each others.

(don’t hesitate to ask anything)