11-06-2011, 08:25 AM
|
#6
|
تاريخ التسجيل: Apr 2010
كلية: كلية الآداب والعلوم الانسانية فرع كليات البنات
التخصص: !!*English*!!
نوع الدراسة: إنتظام
المستوى: متخرج
البلد: جــــدة
الجنس: أنثى
المشاركات: 6,426
|
رد: محتاج احد يصحح لي الـ Essay
،’
~...Good morning brother
?...How are you today and are you ready for your exam
Hope you are ready and happy, too
Look, I correct your essay, and I'm soOoOo proud of you coz your essay is beautiful and have no more mistakes that before, and you what that is mean
I want to tell you some thing very important which is Comma
:We can use comma for many thing like
To join between two sentences that have the same ideas
After joining words such as However, Therefor, First, Second, For example, On the other hand, In contrast, Also, Inconoclusion, etc
The important thing is you have to know where can you put the Comma
?....Ok
:Coz I found that you have this same mistake like this
The third negative, we cannot talk to a human being in this system because it is only a device.
|
This is sOoOo wrong you don't have to put a comma in this sentence at all, unless you mean (Third, + a complete sentence) Coz in this case you have to take out (the+ negative) do you understand me?
:You should write it like this
The third negative aspect is that we cannot talk to a human being in this system because it is only a device.
|
?...Get it
And the rest of the rule you can find it in the same link that I give it to you yesterday
At the end, if you have any Q just say it and don't be shy
May Allah help you to achaive the ful mark yaaaaarb
...See you later
،’
|
|
|
|
|