dear con i'm really very thankful for ur explanation for this type of essay
but actually I'm so familiar in this type of essay and i did the same steps that u mentioned above , i mean i have some mistakes in some sentences structure as English boy corrected , yet i did a comparison essay NOT free writing
and i did the way of point by point ,which i talked about family climate in Ramadan ,and then in the other months and so i did in the other body paragraphs
as belong to why i chose Ramadan and other months with out determine the months that i want to compare with , is because u guys were not exact with ur topics that u offered for us , and because i can't mention one month to compare with Ramadan cuz many months are the same in their aspects and the only months that different is Ramadan and thu alhijah, which i don't see any way to compare with the two of them
i'm not perfect in writing and i like to be not perfect to learn and learn more from my mistakes , it does n't matter if i lose or win , as for as i'm learning and get benefit , i liked ur competition and its really motivate us to be much better in writing and this precious opportunity was given from u guys ,con, miss ,and English boy so thank u all and please stay this way and lets continue our way in English