[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة MS.Fabulous back thank you soooo much con and english boy really i learned a lot from my mistakes con about your question you said that i should n't start with a dialogue we studied in our book something called a hook in the intro it is the most important thing in the essay and our teacher made us practice in it a loooot if you don't write a good hook you will lose a lot of marks this is the definition for the hook A hook is a sentence or group of sentences or a phrase in the introduction that "hooks" or draws the reader in. Basically it can be a question,quotation,statistics and a scenario like i did ^_* and writing a short essay it is a habit and my teacher always says that i write super fast in the exsams because of the time and this essay i wrote it fast because of the time also i was extremely busy yesterday i will work hard on your notes guys and i hope i will n't do these mistakes again well done teachers

Miss Fabulous i didn't say u shouldn't

be careful and go back to my speech

i said i'm sure if u can start with conversation coz it's new thing for me

right ?a

make sure that i'll always say something that i'm sure about i'll not correct things in a moody way

if i'm not sure about something i'll say u should or shouldn't

if i'm not i'll say i'm not sure

thanx Miss hope to back and see again