[LeLou]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maro abdulwahab so do i have any mistakes in my replay up there : / ?

Yes, you have mistakes even in this one.
:$

'Reply'
Replay means play again

The pronoun (I) must be capitalized.

The first letter of a sentence also has to be capitalized.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maro abdulwahab actually its a great idea to begin with . in my point of view its a good start to correct your spelling mistakes in the english language , and i hope that every one will be active with it so we can learn from each other :)

Again, the first letter of a sentence has to be capitalized.
The pronoun 'I' has to be capitalized anywhere in a sentence.

There was no need for that period and saying 'from my point of view' is more correct.
Never add a space before periods, question marks, exclamation marks, and commas.

'our' not 'your'

The first letter of 'English' has to be capitalized.

There was no need for that comma or you could have used a period, omitted 'and,' and started a new sentence.

'everyone' not 'every one'

You can say only 'active' or you can say 'active in this post'