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قديم 26-08-2013, 10:41 PM   #9

LeLou

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تاريخ التسجيل: May 2010
كلية: كلية العلوم
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افتراضي رد: ~|| Let's check our writings :: لــنصــحـح كــتــاباتـنـــا ||~

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الــــدب مشاهدة المشاركة
It's splendid idea
or
It's a splendid idea

??
It's a splendid idea =)
You're welcome.



المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة باذنجانه مشاهدة المشاركة
a wonderful subject that is what i was need to improve my writing and see where i got mistakes
It should be written this way: what I need.


The pronoun (I) should be capitalized even in the middle of a sentence.


Also, "where I make mistakes" is more accurate; even though saying, "and correct my mistakes," or, "and know my mistakes," is even
more acceptable
.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة باذنجانه مشاهدة المشاركة
This is just a suggestion . give us any theme and we will express about it
You should use a colon (:) rather than a period; and don't add a space before the punctuation mark.
You should've learned that during the "English for Beginners" course.

=)

Also, 'write' is more accurate than 'express', since express means: convey a thought or feeling by words or gestures.

Anyway, I will consider your suggestion.
Thank you.
:)


المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة lo0ola.h مشاهدة المشاركة
وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته













That`s a good idea...

I will be with you in this when i retune home from China"if god wish"
A spelling error: retune should be written this way: return.

Again, the pronoun (I) has to be capitalized any where in a sentence.

if god will not wish; and you should use parentheses instead of quotation marks.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الــــدب مشاهدة المشاركة
I trained hard today, I barely move right now. I want to sleep but I can't until finish of Isha prayer.


I can barely move

::

until I finish Al-Ishaa prayer
or:
until I perform Al-Ishaa prayer
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة _OCTOBER مشاهدة المشاركة
yeah let's do that :))))
Misspellings is guaranteed for sure
نقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلةنقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة ____ I myself fit the D.e.s.c.r.i.p.t.i.o.n tightly
although I do reading and English - speaking- sometimes
,but still grammatically horrible
and I consistently mess up annoyed little details in spelling ..
not to mention the misuse of the symbols in paragraph along with the capital letters
which makes the whole thing more painful نقرتين لعرض الصورة في صفحة مستقلة

Anyway
l'll stop by , whenever I feel the need to be checked
or when to provide wrong information to other
either-way , thank you muchly for yet to come

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.
Well, well.
You did pretty well writing the above paragraph but your greatest problem is the misuse of words not the grammatical mistakes.

First, "I do reading and English," can you express the previous phrase in Arabic so I can help you write it again right?

Second, you should say 'but still horrible at grammars' since the phrase you wrote means:
لكني أظل فظيع نحويًا..
في حين كان لازم تقول: لكني فظيع في القواعد =)

Third, you should use 'annoying' not 'annoyed,' because annoying means:
مزعج,

while 'annoyed' is the past tense of 'annoy'.

Fourth, by 'the symbols' do you mean punctuation marks?

Fifth, 'provide wrong information' means:
أقدم معلومات خاطئة!
And I hope that is not what you intend to do.
You should say: 'correct others' wrong information'.

Finally, 'muchly' is not even a word.
you should say: so much or very much.

+
'For yet to come' again, can you express the previous phrase in Arabic?

 

توقيع LeLou  

 

ZERO じゃない


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سبحانك اللهم و بحمدك،، أشهد أن لا إله إلا أنت،، أستغفرك و أتوب إليك..

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التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة LeLou ; 26-08-2013 الساعة 10:56 PM.
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