عندي paragraph محتاجكم تساعدوني فيه (تصحيح الاخطاء)

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السلام عليكم شباب وصبايا
ممكن تساعدوني في تصحيح القطعة وتطلعو الأخطاء اللي فيها والله يجزاكم الف خير


Smoking is Bad for our Health

Dangers of smoking on health is very large . It is kills personal freedom . reduce the power of person. it is affects the smoker and those around him of child and other . it is economic loss of time , money , production and health ... Etc . now we will write of damaging our health .
It is Increases the risk of smoking on the body usually drink tea and coffee . it also increases the seriousness of smoking if the smoker started at an early age( young ) . Smoking is responsible for several diseases such as cancer . long-term ( chronic) respiratory diseases , heart diseases , as well as premature death , hight blood pressure , cancer of the lip , cancer of the tongue and several diseases .
over 440,000 people in usa and 100,000 in the UK die because of smoking each year . 90% of lung cancer patients developed their disease because of smoking . lung cancer is one of the most common cause of cancer deaths in the world . smokers also have a significantly higher risk of developing nations .
conclusion this definitions dangers of smoking on health and disease . also discuss some statistics . in my opinion do not smoking for losing the health .