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Do you no Ryan did last weekend. He went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan builded a huge sand castle. Then, he collect seals and rocks After that, he goed swimming with his brother. Ryan has a wonderful time at the beach

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[saeed al amri]

Do you know what Ryan did last weekend? He went to the beach with his family. First,he built a huge sandy castle. Then, he collected ls and rocks. Finally,He swam with his brother.Ryan has a wonderful time at the beach.

[saeed al amri]

collected ls طبعا نقصت خطا مطبعى

[nour al3mr]

وعليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركـآته

a(indent) Do you know what Ryan did last weekend? He went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan built a huge sand castle. Then, he collected seals and rocks. After that, he went swimming with his brother. Ryan had a wonderful time at the beach.a

و أعتذر على التـأخيـــــر ..

[saeed al amri]

ls بعد عمليه الجمع

[saeed al amri]

اذا بيكتب sand مابيغيرها يكتب sand-castle او يحولها لصفه sandy