A new idea for new students in English section

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا Nice topic, I love it [SIZE=6COLOR=darkorchid][/color][/size] There are a lot of things make me angry ;for example,somebody Exploits my kindness for a temporary benefit, somebody criticizes me with a rude, and Indirect ways ,but I like the respectable and Polite Criticizes (criticism), somebody ignores me, or he is appearing( showing ) the Lack of respect. These are several of reasons make me angry. Thanks halaha zaid please correct me co

yellow =should b dropped
the red letters= should be added
the red words =the substitute

u writing is wonderful , keep it up

also it's better to say ( the one who exploits me ,,, etc ) instead of (somebody exploits me ,,,etc)a

get it ?a