A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

Hello dear ,
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw your essay is beautiful
If you want the truth I don’t know if this is essay ,but I want to know something ????
When we write an essay can we use "the order of time " please I want to know that .
Thank you dear really I appreciate your participation
I think your’s is very good
Allah bless you