قـُـــروْبـــ طـَــآلبــَـآتــْ مُقدمَــة فيْ الأدَبــــ ...2011

[مني يغار الورد]

يجززاك ربي الجنة نوري ويووفقك لكل خير منجد ماقصرتي :)
بنووتا القصديتين هيه
Rita Dove's"Daystar"
She wanted a little room for thinking:
but she saw diapers steaming on the line,
a doll slumped behind the door.

So she lugged a chair behind the garage
to sit out the children's naps.

Sometimes there were things to watch—
the pinched armor of a vanished cricket,
a floating maple leaf. Other days
she stared until she was assured
when she closed her eyes
she'd see only her own vivid blood.

She had an hour, at best, before Liza appeared
pouting from the top of the stairs.
And just what was mother doing
out back with the field mice? why,

building a palace. Later
that night when Thomas rolled over and
lurched into her, she would open her eyes
and think of the place that was hers
for an hour—where
she was nothing,
pure nothing, in the middle of the day.

Linda Pastan's"To a Daughter leaving Home"
When I taught you
at eight to ride
a bicycle, loping along
beside you
as you wobbled away
on two round wheels,
my own mouth rounding
in surprise when you pulled
ahead down the curved
path of the park,
I kept waiting
for the thud
of your crash as I
sprinted to catch up,
while you grew
smaller, more breakable
with distance,
pumping, pumping
for your life, screaming
with laughter,
the hair flapping
behind you like a
handkerchief waving
goodbye.

لو تكتبي العنوان في قوقل بتطلع لك كمان بالشرح
انا بدأت كتبت في الاساي بس ماني عاارفة صرااحة كيف اتعامل مع قصيدتين احسها شوية تدوخ
بس اللي فهمته انه نكتتب اي شي يجي في بالنا اهم شي الديتيل عشان نقنعها
انـا صراحة تكلمت عن ال tone - theme-phor -semile
البدي ممكن القى له هرج بس الكونكلوجن والانتروبـــــس برضه سههل ووممتع
ع فكرة هيه ادتنا الربوع اوراق كيف نكتب اساي بس حسيته مور ادفانس
لوتشي تقصدي قصيدة لندن ؟