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[محمد عماد]

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Advantages and Disadvantages of Modern Technology In Our Life
Technology is a kind of inventions that we cannot dispense of it . The modern Technology is being introduced all the time making it more efficient to what is currently available . However , technology has both advantages and disadvantages .
One advantage is that , technology has the ability to create shortcuts in working and can make tasks easier also . For example , calculators and phones . Through technology the life may be faster but is also easier . With technology we enjoy luxuries such as movies, television, fresh food and refrigerators, ovens to cook on and bake in .
However , with every advantage that technology gives, there is disadvantage . One disadvantage is that , we have to depend on it more and more as we become lazy . Also , sometimes we waste our time when we use technology like chatting for a long time and watching a lot of movies .
In conclusion , the technology is very important in our life although it is expensive . I think our life will not continue without technology and I bet that most people will agree with me . If we didn't have technology we would become victim to things we were ignorant of .
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