محتاج احد يصحح لي الـ Essay

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد ،’ Good evening Mr. Al-Fata I read your sad words, and I become sad coz you felt like that I'm soOorry brother, but you need the truth to be the best, aren't you ? SoOo, You have to practice more and more You will full in love with yourself when you become the best in writing . Not only that, you will fell proud of yourself, too. So, can you write another essay and put it here, it will be very good coz I'm looking to correct it for you and help you to feel comfortable with writing, too Look, I correct your essay Tell me if there is something that you didn't understand it ?...Ok See ya ،’

Thank you Raghad, you're so helpful

ان شألله بكتب مقال ثاني اليوم , لأني والله استفدت من تصحيحكم .. جزاكم الله خير وفالكم النجاح يا رب