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[Sailor of the Dreams]

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Every human in these life has so much love for his own country and as every human there must be some favorite place in the world that would love to visit and discover and to know more about and for me it always has been India. India is a country witch is located in the west of Asia , I have always been fascinated by the people and there living style in India there about 100 religion and some how they have managed to live in peace and shear there happy times and different occasions with etch other and I'm very amazed by the fact that there is about 1000 languages and they still can understand one another and they have such among of respect to there tradition and culture and I have already made a plan for my visit begging form the cites to the historic places , I'll start my journey in the city of Mumbai witch is the New York of India and from Mumbai strait to Delhi and then to Goa and the state of Kerala and you can't go to India without going to one the seventh wonders in the world " The Taj Mahaal " that stunning Belding with the mesmerizing Islamic architecture and the amazing views surrounding it that it make you feel like your in another era and your hundred of years back and moving from " the Taj Mahaal " and to "The Akradash " temple in the Gograte state , to build these temple they didn't used any cement or iron just the pink rocks and it's just so unbelievably spectacular with the combine of the ancient and the modern architecture and they have put all kind of lights to make look like some kind of glowing star , India is full of secrets and beautiful sites and historic places and I just wish that one day I get to make these dream come true and visit it .