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How To Be Successful Student

Education is so important . And being successful when you are younger means you have a bright future ahead you and everyone want to move forward and improve m becoming something bigger . To be successful student is stepping stone to become successful adult you have to work hard for it and earn it by studying and practicing .

First , listen to the teacher carefully and write notes for things he\she mention and if you have question just ask your teacher don’t be shy to ask , it is better to learn from your mistake than being mistaken your whole life remember it's not going to improve your grads only but your knowledge as well .

The second thing , studying at home in every free time you had and you should have time on the week practice for your examination and don’t let anything distract you like video games or watching movies .

The last thing , you should have a good company at school so they can help you and support each other in studying and don’t distract you with other things such as going to hangout and instead they should concierge you to be better student and person even teach you new things you didn't understand or couldn't do by your own .

The aim of education system is teach you facts and figures and you have to be good at it if you looking for a better future and mostly improve what is best on you and work on it . Learning new skills at school grow you're knowledge it's not only words on books and facts its will teach you more than that , moving forward .