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[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن good questions Raghad I think that In fact me dreams are very simple first question i thing my dream make agood relation with allah because I have a lot of guilt and I pray to allh every time forgive my and make me agood man next dream is reach a good future and when i die no body hate me at this time i can see same dream are win . Ihave athor dream but I cannot say that here it is very Special in my life 4- .No iam not afraid I have trust in my self iam sorry for my bad writing but you must accept me ^_* thaaaaaaaaaaaank you raghad :)

First,you are welcome
Second ,where are the red words?or you didn’t uesed ?
Third, I hope Allah make your dreams true .
Fourth,you have some mistakes such as:
In fact,my ....... you have to but a comma after the word
"In fact " such as For exmple, did you understood me
make a good relation with Allah I think the correct word is make a good relationship with Allah.
3_I pray to Allah every time to forgive me .

This is all what I know if someone see other errors are limited please .