A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حلاها زايد unfortunately alot of things make me angry and this causes to me alot of problems in my life I will tell you some of the things that make me angry when I see someone hurt or hit a child and when someone injustice me, and when men thinking that women just a servant cook , wash ,raise the children as a machine, don't need to rest , compassion ,and tenderness Tel me about it !!!!!!!! I know and when someone looks at me for along time maybe you surprised that but really this makes me very angry hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhh weird really " do you believe that when I wrote this topic made me angry hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh h You are sooooooooooo angry .You have to be calm in sometimes ok control yourself I wish anyone to correct my mistake

listen , as I see your write is geting better ,and better,but when you wrote a list you have to put comma and in the end you put and
did you get me ???