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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ريال سعودي طيب انا كتبت هذا الموضوع عن مميزات وعيوب التكنولوجيا الي جاتنا اليوم في الأختبار ... اتمنى من دكاترة الإنجليزي ( سواء طلاب او طالبات ) يصححولي هوا ... ويعطوني الدرجة من 10 عدد الكلمات = 222 كلمة وماعندي مانع اذا احد يبغا ياخذه Advantages and Disadvantages of Technology Technology is a kind of invention that we cannot dispense of it . Technology is being introduced all the time making it more efficient to what is currently available . However , technology has both advantages and disadvantages . One advantage is that , technology has the ability to save our time and it can make tasks easier . For example , calculators and phones . Through technology the life may be faster and easier . With technology we enjoy luxuries such as movies, television, fresh food , ovens to cook on and bake in . However , with every advantage that technology gives, there are some disadvantages . One disadvantage is that , we have to depend on it more and more as a result we become lazy . Also , sometimes we waste our time when we use technology like chatting for a long time and watching a lot of movies . In conclusion , technology is very important in our life despite being expensive . I think our life will be very hard without technology and I bet that most people will agree with me . If we didn't have technology we would become victims to things we were ignorant of . Who knows ? may be technology make the new golden world.

أنا أول شيء لاحظته إنه عنوان قطعتك غلط لازم تحط THE قيل advantages and disadvantages .هذه نبهنا عليها دكتورنا لما كان يدربنا على الرايتنق لكن إن شاء الله بتاخذ درجة حلوة .