محتاج احد يصحح لي الـ Essay

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد i will tell you the truth. in my opinion, i think you deserve 4 coz your essay needs to many things like good structure, lots of information, many sentences, and good organization please, don't be sad but you want the truth coz you are learning brother can i tell you something? I want you to write an essay everyday and we will help you to correct it for you. I promise you to help you as possible as i can, deal ? start from today and don't stop writing from today until saturday, and you will see yourself getting better and better believe brother you can do it easily just practice with time like imagine yourself in your exam and you don't have any time except two hours so, practice more and more see ya ’

والله بصراحة يا رغد أنا جبت كل قوتي بالمقال هذا , وبعد ما خلصت كتابته جاني شعور إني أفضل

كاتب بالعالم , ومع ذلك 4/10 .. بس الشي هذا راح يعطيني دفعه معنوية للمضي قدما إن شألله بستمر

بالكتابة كل يوم لين ربي يفرجها ..


جزاك الله خير ,,,