رايتنق ليفل 4

[7ankoOosh]

السـلآم عليكم ..
انا من دفعة 12 وعندي كم موضوع رايتنق راح انزلو بأذن الله واعذروني اذا كان فيه اخطاء
واللي ابغاه منكم انكم تدعولي اني اتخصص الترم الثاني ( آنظمة )

[7ankoOosh]

أسوأ عطلة

The worst holiday

My name is Ali . I 20 years old . I lives in makkah . I has a good job .

I was 9 years old when I went to Egypt with my family. The flight was very bumpy due to bad weather. I was sick many times. We checked into a hotel after landing. However the room was very small and stuffy. We asked for a bigger room ,but there were no rooms available. The next day we went to the pyramids . I felt so dizzy in the narrow, airless , dark , tomb. Then we went to the museum. There were statues of sphinx everywhere. I looked at the mummies in the glass cases in fear. After a while when I looked back, I could not see my parents. I was lost . I called out to my parents many times and stared crying. Other tourists took me to a policeman. He asked me where we were staying ,but I could not recollect the name of the hotel. finally, the policeman took me to the embassy of Saudi Arabia . the officers asked me for my parents names and telephone number. After a few time, while I was waiting my parents came and took me to the hotel . we went back to Jeddah the next morning. It was the worst holiday of my life.

conclusion I love my family very much because they are very kind.



أفضل صديق

My best friends

His name is ahmad . He is 26 years old . He lives in makkah . He has agood job.

Of all my relative, I like my friends Ahmad the best . He is not married yet . Also In addition,He is tall and handsome and he has curly black hair , and black eyes . He has a kind face and , when you meet him , the first thing you notice about him is his smile . Moreover, He is very active and friendly . He is the kind of person you can always depend on him . Finally, he likes reading books ,especially science books, and love exercising in his free football. Would prefer not to walk .

conclusion I love my friend very much because he is very kind.



وصف قريب

My brother

His name is ahmad . He is 26 years old . He lives in makkah . He has agood job.

Of all my relative, I like my brother Ahmad the best . He is my youngest brother . He is not married yet . Also,He lives with me in a flat in makkah .In addition,He is tall and handsome and he has curly black hair , and black eyes . He has a kind face and , when you meet him , the first thing you notice about him is his smile . Moreover, He is very active and friendly . He is the kind of person you can always depend on him . Finally, he likes reading books ,especially science books, and love exercising in his free time

conclusion I love my brother very much because he is very kind.


سلبيات وايجابيات كبار السن

Advantages and disadvantages of getting older There are Advantages and disadvantages of getting older .

The main Advantage of getting older is that getting older can go out anytim . For example, you can go shopping with your friend anytime and you can come back anytime. One advantage of getting older is that you have free time to play sport like,walking and running. One advantage of getting older is that you do not have to drive acar. This is danger for you because you can't see ways and cars at night. An other advantage is that you don't have to get up early and you have a lot of free time . The main disadvantage you can't eat more sweets because you have a lot of health problems. Such as, diabetes. One disadvantage you have more responsibility. An other disadvantage you have to look after children .

conclusion I think getting older is tiring . I don't like it because it has pros and cons a lot.


شخصية مشهورة

abdul aziz Bin Baz

His name is abdul aziz Bin Baz . He is dead 89 years old . He lives in riyadh . He has a good job .

He is the righteous, god fearing, leader of Islamic knowledge. The one who all Muslims all over the world lean to . The referent for all scholars and Fatwas . he is Abdul aziz Bin Baz. He was born in Thi Alheja , 1335 in Riyadh. He was sighted, then, he got a disease in his eyes , as a result, his sight weakened. After that. He became blind. He memorized the Qur'an when he was a child. Then he started acquiring the Islamic knowledge. He has many books, like "Magmooa Alfatawy " which is a book with many fatwas of different subjects , also different essays and others. He was pointed to be the Mufti of the kingdom, a leader for both scholars' authority and, Efta'a and scientific researches managing.


conclusion He passed away on Thursday , 27/1/1420H. he was 89 then which he spent in studying, pious working, inviting to Allah, doing Muslims' needs and helping them ( may Allah's mercy be upon him and forgives him ) he is really one of the rare people we can ever have.

[BLQiS]

مررررة شكرا
الله يوفقك ويكتبلك الخير فين م كان
وجزاك الله خير

[قروشـ]

ما ادري وش تريد تقدم لنا , لكن من اول سطر فيه اخطاء .

[أبوسراج]

من جد حاس انه في أخطاء كثثثيرة >_<
إنت مصحح القطعة من دكتور ؟؟

[7ankoOosh]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة blqis مررررة شكرا الله يوفقك ويكتبلك الخير فين م كان وجزاك الله خير

العفو ,,

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة قروشـ ما ادري وش تريد تقدم لنا , لكن من اول سطر فيه اخطاء .

ابغى غيري يستفيد ,, وانا قلت اعذروني اذا فيه اخطاء

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أبوسراج من جد حاس انه في أخطاء كثثثيرة >_< إنت مصحح القطعة من دكتور ؟؟

مو كلها يمكن قطعتين اللى مصححها مع الدكتور ,, واذا فيه اخطاء يمكن تكون اخطاء بسيطة غير مؤثرة

[jojo-16]

يعطيك العافيه
مرررررره شكرا

[سام2022]

My name is Ali . I 20 years old . I lives in makkah . I has a good job .

I'm
live
have

الا اخطاء مؤثرة وبدائية كمان ايش اللي i has i lives وكمان الجمل مره قصيره
انا ما درست انجلش بالجامعه وحذفتها بس هل معقول اخر مستوى بالجامعه كذا تكتبوا جمل قصيرة

راجعت القطعة فيها اغلاط كثيرة لاتنكب الطلاب معك

[HIGH]

شكرا لك ولكرمك ..

واللي شاف الـ " الاخطاء " يضبطها للغير الله لا يهينة , بدل مايقول ان فيه اخطاء ويسكت ^_6 ..

بالتوفيق للكل ..

[نحو التميز]

thank you