مساعدة في الرايتنق .. موجود مثال

[عبدالرحمن س م]

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My favorite job is working as a doctor. A doctor cares the Patients. He works day and night. He works in a hospital. He works on a team. I like this job because it's a very important job. I like helping people. My friend is also a doctor so I like this job



My favorite job is working as a teacher . A teacher carries a big responsibility in her classroom. he works 8 hours a day. He works in a school. I like this job because it's a very important job for community . My friend is also a teacher so I like this job