the (perfect essay writing) competition

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة MS.Fabulous hhhhhhhhhhh congratulation on your job mashaa Allah ok i will pray for you to be successful in your jop ^_^

loooool thanks alot Fabulous
yaa this sounds much better .. Wlaah I was so afraid to end as teacher hhuh don't know why I hated this career.. I'm not really up to deal with teenagers !! really fed up with them at home .. how come to meet them again at school haaa3

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy loooool thanks alot Fabulous yaa this sounds much better .. Wlaah I was so afraid to end as teacher hhuh don't know why I hated this career.. I'm not really up to deal with teenagers !! really fed up with them at home .. how come to meet them again at school haaa3

hhhhhhhh that's why u corrected all papers in one day, u wanna get rid of it quickly

but u did very well

good luck at ur new job , translation is a good career

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious E. B did u know this grammatical rule ? or it's now

well tell u what .. I don't follow rules anymore.. it just sounds correct to me!! it comes automatically into my mind !! so my answer is No.. I never even remember that I've studied this

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious hhhhhhhh that's why u corrected all papers in one day, u wanna get rid of it quickly but u did very well good luck at ur new job , translation is a good career

loool you're right
that was my first shoot of correction & when I lately saw urs.. I was blaming my self not to wait for u.. hhh mine appeared very crap.. but still good

experiences

[Conscientious]

hey it is not really a rule

but even they use it in vernacular speech

u can hear it anywhere

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy loool you're right that was my first shoot of correction & when I lately saw urs.. I was blaming my self not to wait for u.. hhh mine appeared very crap.. but still good experiences

Oh , good u learned the lesson fast and u applied it also in ur post

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious Oh , good u learned the lesson fast and u applied it also in ur post

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

OMG u got that

u must be very smart I can tell already

[الملاك الأبيض]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy loooool thanks alot Fabulous yaa this sounds much better .. Wlaah I was so afraid to end as teacher hhuh don't know why I hated this career.. I'm not really up to deal with teenagers !! really fed up with them at home .. how come to meet them again at school haaa3

congratulation for ur carrier and may Allah guide u always to success.

although u hate teaching but i was impressed with ur correction cuz i remembered the old days when my teacher was correct just like ur way and give me the sheet with a great mess hhhh

well, u should focus on ur job and come here to have fun correcting our mistakes lol


and actually I'm as the same as u cuz i don't follow any rules in writing and i forget all the rules very quickly i just talk and write English by nature , can u see me a translator in the future like u ? lol

i really like translating ,don't worry i won't envy u i already knocked on the wood hhhhh

may Allah protect u and give u the success in ur job"translating not teaching i won't pray on u :4:"

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الملاك الأبيض hi every body , actually I'm so thankful for all of ur efforts and especially our judges and teachers con and English boy u were professional in ur correction and we have so many benefits of our mistakes though , i have my own notes about ur correction for my essay and i will clarify it for u to convince me with ur correction if i was wrong : 1- this sentence u get me so wrong in it : This) is our situation for a the whole one month called Ramadan . Ramadan is the month of fasting .a month of and worshiping ,a month which unlike any other month of the year >> what i mean that i put"a" before the word "whole " because this month that I'm talking about is not identified yet. thats why i did n't put " the " like u did in ur correction then i mentioned that this month is called "Ramadan " only then i could put " the " not "a" 2- with their relatives in Ramadan for break fast or for Sohoor and this thing(which) shows the closeness and the support between them >> this sentence i believe i should n't omit the word " with " because its making the meaning much connected and the word "the" before "closeness &support "should stay to have better arranged sentence , other wise the meaning of this sentence won't be perfect another thing , that i confess that i have so many run-on sentence which give disadvantages in my writing and i have to work on this part and i have a repeated words in my essay and some silly mistakes cuz i was in a hurry , but no matter if i win or lose it was my pleasure to participate with u and to be corrected from a great teachers like u con and English boy it was an honor to me cuz i learned too many things from ur correction more than i learned from my centra teachers .and I'm looking forward to have another stage for this competition and especially con i really thank u for ur great efforts with us may allah bless u all guys :)

Con .. plz help me with this >> I'm so stuck ..

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy Ooh god hh man.. I was too excited lolu just want to show off huh .. there's an energy water(blue water) that I used to drink every single day back when I was studying at Essex.. I would buy a bottle even it might cost me a 100$ for each bottle, I don't care.. just want to have it for one more time.. couldn't find anywhere here in KSA

does that blue water really give u energy ?a

i'll buy it if this is true

i really need energy