قـُـــروْبـــ طـَــآلبــَـآتــْ مُقدمَــة فيْ الأدَبــــ ...2011

[Raan]

السلام عليكم

هنا شرح لقصيدة Daystar قريب جدا من شرح مس اشواق


The narrator of the poem "Daystar" sets a tone that is burdensome, monotonous, ritualistic and depressing. The poem describes a woman's attempt to find rest from her daily duties as a mother and wife. She looks forward
to one hour of escape from her family's demands. Each day, while the children are napping, the woman sits alone behind the garage. During this hour of the day the woman can release the burdens placed on her and receive strength to continue meeting her family's needs.

The first and second stanzas of the poem give the impression that the woman is overwhelmed by motherhood. The diapers hanging on the line and the doll slumped behind the door indicate she has her hands full caring for an infant and toddler or young child. The phor of the doll slumped in the corner mirrors the woman's own weariness. Her mind is distracted with all the work to be done inside the house.

The woman finds a restful place behind the garage. Sitting behind the garage suggests the woman wants to be close enough to the house in case her family needs her. It shows she cares for them, but values her time away from them.

The third stanza describes the woman's ritual of clearing her mind. Simply being able to watch a cricket or a floating maple leaf is a peaceful escape for her. The term "she'd see only her own vivid blood" indicates an awareness of life flowing in her veins. Behind the garage she can still exist, but without effort or distraction in her world of nothingness.

In the fourth stanza, the woman's hour of peace and nothingness is interrupted by her child Liza who appears on the stairs pouting and demanding to know what her mother is doing. It seems to be a ritual for Liza to wake before the other children and retrieve mom from behind the garage. Liza does not understand why her mother would prefer to be "out back with the field mice" rather than inside taking care of the house. Her mother responds that she is "building a palace." This phrase indicates the woman treasures her break behind the garage and this sanctuary is her "palace" where she rules the kingdom. At all other times her children and husband have rule over her.

بالتوفيق للجميع

[r7eel]

بنات مس أشواق ( ربي يسعدها) رسلت أشياء مهمه متعلقه بالـ quiz



My dear literature students,

First, I would like to wish you good luck and may Allah help you and enlighten you with the correct answers:)

Second, please find below some comments in response to your questions:

1- The four poems included are: London, The Ruined Maid, To a Daughter Leaving Home, and Daystar

2- The historical background is only relevant in "London" and "The Ruined Maid," but "Daystar" and" To a Daughter Leaving Home" are modern poems, so there is no relevance of the historical background to the poems. Therefore, don't worry about it.

3- Both "Daystar" and "To a Daughter Leaving Home" talk about motherhood. However, each poet treated the theme differently.

4- The difference between "How" and "Why" questions is the element that is being questioned. Don't dwell on the questions' structure just focus on the element(s) that is/are being asked about. As I said in class, this is an indirect way of asking about how ONE or MORE than one element contributes to the idea of the poem. Don't write an analysis of the whole poem if I'm asking about one thing. You will lose marks this way for just memorizing.

5- The poems will not be provided in the test. You are expected to look at every poem in terms of the six elements: STILTS. You must make sure to memorize examples to support each element.

6- We said to focus on the difference between Melia and the other girl in three main aspects: appearance (how they looked differently and why), characteristics (how their characters were different and why), and their speech (how they spoke differently and why). These three aspects make them different, but the poet uses "Pun" to compare their "Ruined" destinies.

7- If you remember when we used the graphic organizer to analyze "London," we said that the "Tone" is determined by the words that the poet uses. Therefore, look at the words the poet uses to elicit the poet's attitude towards his subject.

8- There will not be a question asking about the meaning of words in the poems. However, you are expected to know them in order to analyze the poems.

9- Remember to use correct punctuation, spelling, and grammar.

10- Use the present tense.

11- Provide examples to support your analyses.

12- Come on time. You will only have one hour to solve the quiz.

13- Eat something. Your brain cannot function on an empty stomach!

14- Relax. You already know the information; you just need to organize it into a coherent answer.



All the best!



بالتوفيق

[منى30]

اش الميتافور والسيميلي في القصيدتين
Daystar
To a Duaghter Leaving Home

[إلهام]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عوالي95 الهام لاشكر على واجب .. بالعكس انا ماكتبت شي.. وكان ودي افيدكم اكثر من كذا اختبار السبت اللي راح اختبرته.. بس شعبة الساعه 8 ماذاكرنا القصه لان مس رشا قالت لنا انو ماراح تجيب شي غير information عن القصه واكدت لنا ذا الشي.. ولمن جا الاختبار انصدمنا .. وقلنا انو انتي ماقلتي حيجي زي كذا .. بس كويس عدت سليمه وجاوبت على الاسئله كلها صح واغلب البنات برضو.. وديـــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ

لآ بالعكس .. إنتي مـــآقصرتي معآنـآ الله يسعدكــ يـــــآآآربــــ .. فآلكم الفل مآركـ في كل الإختبآرآتـــ

سعـــآده الطــآلبهـ الشآطره ...
ألف شكر خيتوو ..
بس fortunato أعتقد إنه Dynamic و montresor هوآ Static
لأن أفكآر و مشآعر وووو montresor مــآ تغيرت إلى نهآيهـ القصه عكس Fortunato

................
اعذرونــي بنوتآآتــ .. كنت أتمنى أكتب كل شيء أمس زي مآ اتفقنآ بس للآسف نزلنـآ مكه وألحين جيتـــ ...... ويآآليل مـآ أطولكــ ...

[إلهام]

The Jewelry ..

1/ setting
في بـــــــــآريس ..
2/climax
لمــــآ اكتشف الزوج إن المجوهرآت كآنتــ حقيقية ... وتكملوآ
3/Ending
unhappy وتشرحوآ كيف
4/characters
الزوج (protagonist) وهوآ (Round Dynamic)
الزوجه (antagonist) وهيه(Round static)
5/method of characterization
Direct}}} مو متأكدهـ مررره
6/narrator
طبعآ limited omniscientوفي نآس يقولوآ برضو ممكن تجي objective
بس أنـآ أنو الأفضل الاكتفآء بالأول
7/Theme
ممن تقولوآ إن المظآهر مو دآئمآ تكون زي الوآقع أو إنو ممكن يعيش بسعآده مع شخصيه غير مخلصه والعكس صحيح
8/symbol
المجوهرآت unfaith أو unfaithfulness
9/Irony
1, verbal >>>إنو زوجته تعرف إن المجوهرآت مزيفه ومع ذلك تنكر دآئمآ ومآقآلت له
2, situation>> عن اكتشآف حقيقة المجوهرآت وبرضو زوجته الثآنيهـ
10/stucture................. chronological


موفقين ...
إذآ في أخطآء املآئيهـ مشوهـآ ... من العجلهـ ^_^

[إلهام]

بس يآ حلوين الآيروني ممكن تطلعوآ برضو مو بس اللي كتبنآ

[إلهام]

طــــــــــــــــــآآآلبــــــــــآتـــ مس أشوآآآآق مررررررررره شكرآآآ الله يسعدكــم يآآآآآآربــــــ

طــــآلبآت مس رندآآ وينكــــم ^_^

موفقين جميعآ ‘‘

[loloita]

بنات الفكشن
الكتاب اش سويتوا فيه؟؟؟؟
مرررة صعب مو راضي يدخل رأسي
ولا قادرة استوعب شي منه
وضاع وقتي ع الفاضي
وبس عناصر الفكشن؟؟؟

[N O D E]

Hii girls

i am gonna share some info with u, hopfully it z gonna b usefull

The jewelry
Mr.lantin : main character, protagonist, round, dynamic
Msr lantin's wife : antagonist, round, static
method : indirect
point of view : objective -- i think
structure : chronological
conflict : person against himself
theme : could be that life is full of irony
or
how ppl ignore a situation may upset theme if they are compensated enough


The Cask

montresor : protagonist, round, static
fortunato : antagonist, round, dynamic
luchresi : minor
narrator 1st person, limited omnicient
structuer : flashback
theme : how can revenge blind human's vision


best of luck 4 us all <3

[loloita]

إلهااام بسألك أنتي اش كتبتي في المورال مسج اللي في ذا جولري؟؟؟؟