Workshop

[عبير العسيري]

I hope that I can leave my fear so I can learn well

correct me

[AL-AOLANI]

I can`t see any mistakes

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Al-majesty I am looking forward to day that I will graduat from kaau with a perfect average.This is my big dream that is my vision

good correction but there is to after forward ...ok

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

ur idea is amazing

and i like topics like this

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبير العسيري I hope that I can leave my fear so I can learn well correct me

Firstly, I would say that your sentence is perfectly shaped and no mistakes on it either grammatical or spelling
but
I recommend you to exchange leave to (to get rid of) this phrase is used to such these cases.. I heard it nearly everyday when I were in England. It might be not formal or academic.
anyways, the sentence will be as followed

I hope that I can leave my fear so I can learn well

I wish if I can get rid of my fear, so I will learn very well

Damn, hhh I've changed the whole thing lool.. sorry, I just rewrite it in my way. never worry, ur sentence is totally true

please, correct me as well !!

[نص دافوره]

???? it could be avoid instead of leave

??what do u think

[عبير العسيري]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy Firstly, I would say that your sentence is perfectly shaped and no mistakes on it either grammatical or spelling but I recommend you to exchange leave to (to get rid of) this phrase is used to such these cases.. I heard it nearly everyday when I were in England. It might be not formal or academic. anyways, the sentence will be as followed I hope that I can leave my fear so I can learn well I wish if I can get rid of my fear, so I will learn very well Damn, hhh I've changed the whole thing lool.. sorry, I just rewrite it in my way. never worry, ur sentence is totally true please, correct me as well !!

First, I like your style
Second, I think both sentences are true
but I,m not sure about will
third, correct me

[عبير العسيري]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نص دافوره ???? it could be avoid instead of leave ??what do u think

I do not know exactly what you mean

please explain to me

[Al-majesty]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious good correction but there is to after forward ...ok >>>>>>>>>>>>>> ur idea is amazing and i like topics like this

Thanks alot that is my glad

I am waiting for ur coming to help us

[Al-majesty]

Here we are

I brought two sentence to u and I wish from u tell me which one is true


I look forward to hearing from you

I look forward to hear from you

[Conscientious]

the first one

right ??a

of course loool