::: دروس خصوصية منهجية لمادة Writing 2 Lane-216 :::

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JS

Thank you so much

It's great idea

I'ill try to do my best

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

Here are some topics to think about

choose one of them and try to write a comparison and contrast essay

A. Vacationing in Paris or taking a three-week trip down the Amazon.
B. Growing up in a small town or growing up in a large city.
C. Working for large company or running your own business.
a reference of the first lesson is the site of eslbee


Jasmine

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Welcome Alfata,

thanks your coming

I hope we improve our writing

soon insha'a Allah I'll copy more models of

Coparison and Contrast

to get more benefits


Js

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hi jasmine

thanks for this usefull topic Iam very weak in writing and I will study english language at next year insha allah I want improve my wraiting skilles and I make sure that this topic will help me in this point

:notes

Iam sorry for the writing mistakes that in my reply

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I want choosing this topic

B. Growing up in a small town or growing up in a large city


Soon I'll finish't

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Rowaydah my dear

welcome 1000 in English, and I trust insha Allah that you will succeed if you keep working in the Lan

Alfata
I like your choice, so I will write on it ,too

JS

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Ok

I finished my essay
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aaaaThe people who lived in a large cities almost having

more troubles than people who lived in small cities. A lot

of people in big cities when thy took there vacation thy

decide to spend all there vacation days in there village. For

example in Riyadh and Jeddah we can see the most of people

in summer taking there vacation and leaving there cities to

enjoying in small town. a



aaaaaThere's many positives thinks for living in small town

and getaway from the rush in big cities. First of this

positives, the children growing up in healthy wither, the second

think the time, it w'll be more shortly to reach any place you want

third think it's more safely to living in small town, also we know

that most of rich people around the world had many places in deferent

towns faraway from big cities.a



aaaaaIn conclusion of all this thinks, we can say that small town is

more better than big city for living in it.a

I hop it's ok

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

good Masha'a Allah you finished early


excuse me brother I am not a profissional to judge your writing, but as a beginner in writing
I will say some tips that fit with me

you wrote just three paragragh, but the true essay should has four or five paragragh

so, try to write the fourth paragraph

also, do you know Microsoft Office???

it is a great programme that correct our mistakes in writing either spelling or fragments

it is important to write your essay on that programme especially now because we don't have a teacher who can correct what we write

At the end, do not forget to rewrite the essays on the first page of this thread, for they will help you more

All the best to the all

JS

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it's a great work my sister

I want to add a file witch helps while writing an essay

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thanks alot for this useful topic

it is an easy way to understand writing 2
I fall in it this semester and i hope i have good mark in the next term

thanks again