::: دروس خصوصية منهجية لمادة Writing 2 Lane-216 :::

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

Second

The other method which is

Point by Point Organization

Consuming Fresh Foods Instead of Canned Foods Eating is an activity that we as humans do at least two times a day. We live in a world where the variety of food is immense, and we are responsible for what we eat. We decide what we are about to eat and how it will affect our bodies. The purpose of this essay is to compare and contrast the differences between eating fresh foods instead of canned foods. The three main differences are flavor, health benefits, and cost. The most notable difference between these two kinds of foods is their flavor. Fresh foods have great flavor and taste because they keep all their natural conditions. Canned foods however, lack a lot of its flavor characteristics because there are some other chemical products added to the natural foods. It is logical that the fresh foods will have a greater taste and flavor when consumed just because of the time in which they have been prepared. Comparing both types of foods we notice another difference. There is a health factor that affects both of them. Canned foods lose some of the original fresh food nutrients when stored, and also it has to be tinned with many conservatives and chemical factors that prolong the f life and apparent freshness of the food but could also become toxic if consumed too often. Yet another difference between these two types of foods is the cost. Canned foods are much more expensive than fresh foods. Here the benefit of buying tinned foods is that they are easier to find, for example, in a supermarket instead of the market like the fresh foods, and they require less work to prepare than fresh foods, just open and serve. Here are the main three differences between buying fresh foods and buying canned foods. As we can see it comes down to a personal choice, based on the time each person has, the money and the importance he/she gives to his/her nutrition and health. Therefore it is important that you consider your possibilities and choose the best type of foods for your convenience and lifestyle.

The essay above is the "classic" five paragraph essay that all non-native speakers of English should learn to write. This essays also contains the "classic" point-by-point organization, each point stated and developed in a single paragraph. The essay contains five paragraphs that contrast three differences between fresh and canned foods. The essay includes (1) an introduction, (2) the development of the first difference (flavor), (3) the development of the second difference (health benefits), (4) the development of the third difference (cost), and (5) a conclusion. In the true classic tradition, the three main differences in this contrast essay—flavor, health benefits, and cost—are stated both in the introduction and the conclusion as well.

The method above is the one we suppose to write in our course Lane216

so, read the model and rewrite it

JS

[الفتى]

JS

Thank you so much

It's great idea

I'ill try to do my best

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

Here are some topics to think about

choose one of them and try to write a comparison and contrast essay

A. Vacationing in Paris or taking a three-week trip down the Amazon.
B. Growing up in a small town or growing up in a large city.
C. Working for large company or running your own business.
a reference of the first lesson is the site of eslbee


Jasmine

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Welcome Alfata,

thanks your coming

I hope we improve our writing

soon insha'a Allah I'll copy more models of

Coparison and Contrast

to get more benefits


Js

[رويده عباس]

hi jasmine

thanks for this usefull topic Iam very weak in writing and I will study english language at next year insha allah I want improve my wraiting skilles and I make sure that this topic will help me in this point

:notes

Iam sorry for the writing mistakes that in my reply

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I want choosing this topic

B. Growing up in a small town or growing up in a large city


Soon I'll finish't

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Rowaydah my dear

welcome 1000 in English, and I trust insha Allah that you will succeed if you keep working in the Lan

Alfata
I like your choice, so I will write on it ,too

JS

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Ok

I finished my essay
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aaaaThe people who lived in a large cities almost having

more troubles than people who lived in small cities. A lot

of people in big cities when thy took there vacation thy

decide to spend all there vacation days in there village. For

example in Riyadh and Jeddah we can see the most of people

in summer taking there vacation and leaving there cities to

enjoying in small town. a



aaaaaThere's many positives thinks for living in small town

and getaway from the rush in big cities. First of this

positives, the children growing up in healthy wither, the second

think the time, it w'll be more shortly to reach any place you want

third think it's more safely to living in small town, also we know

that most of rich people around the world had many places in deferent

towns faraway from big cities.a



aaaaaIn conclusion of all this thinks, we can say that small town is

more better than big city for living in it.a

I hop it's ok

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

good Masha'a Allah you finished early


excuse me brother I am not a profissional to judge your writing, but as a beginner in writing
I will say some tips that fit with me

you wrote just three paragragh, but the true essay should has four or five paragragh

so, try to write the fourth paragraph

also, do you know Microsoft Office???

it is a great programme that correct our mistakes in writing either spelling or fragments

it is important to write your essay on that programme especially now because we don't have a teacher who can correct what we write

At the end, do not forget to rewrite the essays on the first page of this thread, for they will help you more

All the best to the all

JS

[مملكة عمري]

it's a great work my sister

I want to add a file witch helps while writing an essay