A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

If you want go ....
I want to know where I can go....
You make me live after you with pain,and hurts ....
If you walked ...,and if you find other love ....
where I can find love like you ....
Would you accept it on me ????
Your hands leave main....
You forget who live for you...
whether he live or dead....
and if you intended to love agin please don’t foeget me ...
that I love you...

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد If you want go .... I want to know where I can go.... You make me live after you with pain,and hurts .... If you walked ...,and if you find other love .... where I can find love like you .... Would you accept it on me ???? Your hands leave main.... You forget who live for you... whether he live or dead.... and if you intended to love again please don’t forget me ... that I love you...

a beautiful sense .......

god protect you
:)

Am I right in my corrections ?

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن a beautiful sense ....... god protect you :) Am I right in my corrections ?

Thank you
your correct is right

What about you ??Do you want write anything befor traveling

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد thank you your correction is right What about you ??do you want write anything befor traveling

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[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد thank you your correct is right What about you ??do you want to write anything befor traveling

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حتى خاصية تعديل المشاركة مسحوبة..!!!!
:)

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن . . . حتى خاصية تعديل المشاركة مسحوبة..!!!! :)

وانت قاعدي عالوحدة ههههههه
I type so fast that’s why I have a stupid mistakes without make sure if they are correct or not(OK Captain )I’m so sorry because I have these mistakes ,I will make sure next time OK sir.

Just don’t lough on me.
:)
:)

[Conscientious]

عيون عليا

which respond u want me to correct ??a

or if u want to give me an open permission

no problem

[عيون عليا]

Thanks my dear for your reply

I want to give you an open permission

[عيون عليا]

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I have an idea
let's go to write about an essay like deive and comparing essays
because we will learn it in the next semester .

Let's discover our skills and practice them more
ok if you are agree , we are going to write about deive essay
DO you understand ??

I am waiting your reply

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا I I have an idea let's go to write about an essay like deive and comparing essays because we will learn it in the next semester . Let's discover our skills and practice them more ok if you are agree , we are going to write about deive essay DO you understand ?? I am waiting your reply

It’s abeautiful idea dear,but I didn’t do this befor how can we we did it ??
what are the steps to write an essay??