::: دروس خصوصية منهجية لمادة Writing 2 Lane-216 :::

[سعيد المسهري]

That‘ s very kind of you *thank you so match

[*moon light*]

very nice idea

keep going

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

hello dears,
Mamlakt Omri,
thanks a lot for that , for it is very good. I will put the link at the begining of this thread.

Aldaloa'ah,
welcome dear
let us forget the fail and begin a new blank page that should be filled with the new expertise and writing skills that we didn't have them before.

Saeed,
moon light<<I like your name :)
you are so welcome, and let us see your contribution on this thread.

JS

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

welcome all

let us complete our lessson which was about

comparison and contrast essay

Here are some models of that kind of essasys

and as what we agreed at the first

we should read them mor than once and rewrite them at least two times

Two Great Mexican Cities Becoming a foreign student has given me the opportunity of living in two cities at the same time: Queretaro and San Miguel. Living in each city regularly has let me see many differences between the both, but there are three main contrasts between them, which are the size of the cities, the life rhythm of each city, and the activities you can do in each city. Usually the first difference that all people see is the size of the cities. Queretaro has grown into a great urban mass filled with industries, buildings, roads, and lots of people. The time it takes you to get from one place to another shows us how big it has become. San Miguel still maintains the essence of a colonial town in which most of its townsfolk know each other although the city has grown a lot in the last years. Another great difference is the rhythm of life in each city. Queretaro has become a city in which its people are usually in a hurry and have a lot of things to do throughout the day. This can be seen by the amount of traffic in the city. On the other hand, San Miguel still remains quite a calm city where most people walk and take their time. Maybe the most important difference between the cities are the activities you can do. In Queretaro you can find all sorts of things to do like shopping in plazas or going to the movies, etc. In San Miguel, there are places to drink a coffee and chat, theaters and art galleries to visit, and many places with beautiful architecture and decoration you can admire. As you can see, there is a great difference between these two cities, and it is best to be in each city according to what you want to do. If you like to be active during the day, survive traffic and stress, and go shopping and have fun at clubs or bars, Queretaro is the place to be. But if you want to have a calm day, hang out with friends to catch up on things, or use your time in cultural activities like painting or music, San Miguel is a great option.

the other one

Cows and Whales There are some things that happen to cows and whales. One of the things, both cows and whales are eaten by people in some countries as edible meat. Another thing, although they are living different places like ocean and land, they have their own lives. It seems that cows and whales are in a same situation. But there are some differences that could be compared. First, many cows are slaughtered everyday. On the other hand, whales are protected by national law recently. Second, cows are important provisions for all over the world. However, whales are important edible animals only in a few countries. Finally, there is the biggest difference between cows and whales. It is that whales are free in the huge ocean until caught by people, and cows will be grown up in the field by the people to eat. The first difference between cows and whales is that cows are the most popular edible meat all over the world. Therefore, many cows are butchered everyday. Of course, there are several reasons that people use cows to their provisions. Because cows are easy for farmers to breed, and they are not as clever as other animals. On the other hand, whales have been protected by a law. (The United Nations Convention on the Law of the Sea) Therefore, every whaler has been limited in number to catch the whales recently. The reason of this law is whales are not easy to breed as cows. And they are such a clever animals more than any other kind of animal. The second difference is that cows are important provisions all over the world. Almost of all countries use beef as their main dish. Therefore, it is nothing wound and give any impression us to slaughter cows. But whales have been used as edible meat in a few countries like small islander countries. Therefore, for the people who are living in big countries, to slaughter the whales look like violence activity and wounded hunting. The final difference is the biggest difference between cows and whales. Cows are raised by farmers in the fields that are surrounded by fences. They don't have any future. And they have to wait their slaughter in the field. On the other hand, whales are free in a huge ocean. They can swim and travel wherever they want. Even though, they are caught by people, other whales have a future. They don't need to wait their slaughter. They have their lives and freedom until caught by people. In conclusion, there are something that happen to cows and whales. Both cows and whales are eaten by people as edible meat. Some people said that it is so poor for whale to be caught by whaler. But, how about cows? Sometimes cows and whales are both on the same situations. However, practically both cows and whales are completely opposite situations and different treatment.

All the best to you

JS

[رويده عباس]

Dear Jasmin

thank you very much for this great lessones but can you show us the rules of writeing for the beginners

good luck

[صمتى حكى بك]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

hi everyone

and thanks a lot Js that is hard work
and so usefull for us
I will get back to join to u
and write as soon as I can
god bless u

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Rowaydah

hellooo dear

for writing 1

your essays are different than writing two

you will take insha'a Allah

Example Essay
Decriptive Essay
Process Essay

At the begining of the course you will test in Grammar which called

(Sentence skills)

I do suggest to search about them on google

and please check the attachment below

there are two useful sites that are better than our book

and one d o c u m e nt illustrates the effective essay

also, I advise you to buy a grammar book and practice on it

If you want to know our book I can send you the title of it

JS

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Samti,

welcome dear

I'm waiting your participation

JS

[رويده عباس]

oh thank you honey

Iwill study all this summer insha allah

pleas give me the title of the grammar book

God bless you

[الفتى]

J s

Thank you so much

I thought that i'm good in my essay loooool

never mine, I'll be right it again and I'll do my best


god pless you