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ذولا تعبيرين كتبتهم انا عن My Fav food
و My first time i went abroad
لكم حرية الأختيار حبيتو تحفظوها وتلقوها كان بها ماحبيتو شئ رآجع لكم انا كتبتها لنفسي
وقلت انزلها هنا للي مآقدر يكتب او ماهو عارف الخ
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MY FIRST TIME I WENT ABROAD
My first time i went abroad when I was ten years old , eight years ago .
I went to Amsterdam in Netherlands , i went with my family except my big brother .
I travelled By plane , the journey take 9 hours .
when i arrived there was a taxi waited me and took me to the hotel .
It’s small hotel but so Beautiful . I stayed about 3 weeks.
I visited parks and museums but the best thing in Amsterdam is the VAN GOGH MUSEUM .
I really enjoyed on my trip , i hope you can go there too .

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My FAVORITE FOOD
my favorite food is pizza , you can fined pizza all over the world .
There are several kinds of pizza like pizza with cheese , pizza with vegetables , pizza with chicken ...etc .
For me I love pizza with cheese often the important components are pizza dogh , cheese and tomato .
In my city there is a restaurant called PIZZA HOT i like eating there with my family or my friends .
My mother cooks for us pizza in home not every day but in mondays and thursdays , ammmm a really want to eat pizza now

اللي يشوف انو فيها غلط , شئ ناقص , حاب يعدل على حاجه يقولنا
وان شاء الله اكون افدتكم
والرايتينج ارجعو للسي دي رآح تلقو تبويب مكتوب عليه رايتينج اضغطوه
واختارو اليونت وراح تطلع لكم نفس الموضوع بس المحتوى غير تقدرو تاخذوه
وتغيرو مثلن [ الأيـآم او الشهور الوقت ,, الخ ] يعني حاجات بسيطه
ادخلو وراح تفهموه

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