A new idea for new students in English section

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

[QUOTE=Conscientious;2468314]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Pardon me Raguda , I can't just correct anything and every respond , But as I told u and ur friends if anyone wants me to correct him , he can just write this sentence at the end of the reply Correct me Conscientious Then I'll be happy to help u all , but some members don't want me to correct them , so I can't be rude and do the correction without their permissions , u know why ?? because people are two kinds in learning First – some people learn perfectly when they make mistakes and no one correct them because they don't want to be frustrated and they want to be free as they are learning for they have much confidence in their abilities and skills and they feel that they don't have any mistake Second – some people learn more perfectly when they find a person who guides them and corrects them every time because they don't feel shy at all and the most important thing for them is to know their mistakes . For this reason I don't want to be an obstacle in the way of those who belongs to the first type This respond is directed to all members not only Raguda Good luck

sister really you make me very upset.
sister, we are here to learn and respect us .
any buddy need learning he must need helping from his brothers here .you are the clever brother and the respectful expert here .the outher students thy do not come to our friends here and give us Assistance and helping .
sister plz donot see that another time plz
you are our partner in this subject and you are the useful girl.
sister believe me we can work and leaning without you .really me and captain ragad and other friend proud of you and need you here every time. sister plz I ask you visit us every day to correct us please please please stop see that another time

I wait your promise to visit us every day

here , we are brothers and no shy or upset from you
any one do not like you,captain ragad will take him out


I wait you

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد وانت قاعدي عالوحدة ههههههه I type so fast that’s why I have a stupid mistakes without make sure if they are correct or not(OK Captain )I’m so sorry because I have these mistakes ,I will make sure next time OK sir. Just don’t lough on me. :) :)

maybe I am here only to find your mistakes
:)
:)

Iam joking but I want benefit you.

[عيون عليا]

I

I have an idea
let's go to write about an essay like deive and comparing essays
because we will learn it in the next semester .

Let's discover our skills and practice them more
ok if you are agree , we are going to write about deive essay
DO you understand ??

I am waiting your reply

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

[QUOTE=Conscientious;2468314]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Pardon me Raguda , I can't just correct anything and every respond , But as I told u and ur friends if anyone wants me to correct him , he can just write this sentence at the end of the reply Correct me Conscientious Then I'll be happy to help u all , but some members don't want me to correct them , so I can't be rude and do the correction without their permissions , u know why ?? because people are two kinds in learning First – some people learn perfectly when they make mistakes and no one correct them because they don't want to be frustrated and they want to be free as they are learning for they have much confidence in their abilities and skills and they feel that they don't have any mistake Second – some people learn more perfectly when they find a person who guides them and corrects them every time because they don't feel shy at all and the most important thing for them is to know their mistakes . For this reason I don't want to be an obstacle in the way of those who belongs to the first type This respond is directed to all members not only Raguda Good luck

عفوا اختى فى السطر التاسع تقريبا ابغى اقول وى كان نت ليرن ويذ اوت يو
قمت من اللخبطة كتبت وي كان ليرن ويذ اوت يو


اسف كنت اقصد لا نتستطيع التعلمبدون مساعتدكم ارجوك
الاخوان كلهم يقولو محتاجين ناس يصححون لهم
وبدونزعل بلعكس جدا احنا بحاجتك ياختى

اتمنى ماتكون قريت ردي السابق وفهمتنى غلط
حاولت اسوي تعديل لكن الله يسامح اللى اخذ منى كل شي حتى امكانية تعديل المشاركة
راحت على
:)
:)
اسال الله للجميع التوفيق
^_^

[عيون عليا]

اقصد المقال الوصفي

decriptive essay

بس مو راضي ينكتب الاسبلينق مزبوط

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن maybe I am here only to find your mistakes :) :) Iam joking but I want benefit you.

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I said it befor and I will say again If my mistakes will make your English apper I will do it again and again
Thank you for your good lessen

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious i think when u use THE instead of MY it would be better because u are comparing ur mother to other mothers but u r not comparing her with ur other mothers , as if u have many no one got it ??and Allah knows the best

Thank you It is a very good lesson
You are agood teacher
Thank you

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا salut = french word like welcome in English language obedience=every thing we do it to god like praying,and fasting ..Etc. I hope to have a good grammar.. Thanks for your correcting my mistake Thanks Raghad

No,thank you I learn a new words from you dear

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا I I have an idea let's go to write about an essay like deive and comparing essays because we will learn it in the next semester . Let's discover our skills and practice them more ok if you are agree , we are going to write about deive essay DO you understand ?? I am waiting your reply

It’s abeautiful idea dear,but I didn’t do this befor how can we we did it ??
what are the steps to write an essay??

[عيون عليا]

Peace to you all

Let me start with a general idea about How to write?? ..


في البداية يجب أن نبدأ بالقاعدة العامة "حول كيف نكتب ؟؟"


Any essay should include three items


يجب أن تحتوي أي مقالة على ثلاثة عناصر


A- The Topic Sentence

The main idea of a paragraph is usually introduced in the first sentence. This is called the topic sentence. The topic sentence is the most important sentence in the paragraph. It focuses the topic by giving the writer's main idea, opinion, or feeling about the subject.

A good topic sentence is not too general or too narrow


أ – العبارة الافتتاحية

الفكرة الأساسية التي تعّرف المقالة عادة تأتي في أول جملة . وتسمى العبارة الافتتاحية . وبالتالي يجب أن تكون أهم عبارة في المقالة . وهي التي تعطي الفكرة الأساسية لكاتب المقال . وكذلك شعوره ورأيه حول الموضوع .
وبالطبع العبارة الافتتاحية لا يجب أن تكون عامة بشكل واسع ولا ضيقة جدا .


B- Supporting Sentences

The topic sentence of a paragraph is followed by a number of other sentences called supporting sentences. These sentences make up the body of a paragraph. In a well-written paragraph, all of the supporting sentences give more information about the topic sentence


ب – الجمل المساندة

العبارة الإفتتاحية تتبعها في العادة عدد من الجمل تسمى بالجمل المساندة . هذه الجمل تكمل المقالة . وفي المقالات الجيدة كل الجمل المساندة تعطي معلومات أكثر عن العبارة الافتتاحية .


C- The Concluding Sentence

A paragraph generally ends with a concluding sentence. This sentence pulls the paragraph together and tells the reader the paragraph is finished. The concluding sentence often restates the main idea in different words or summarizes the major points. It should follow naturally form the body of the paragraph


ج – الخاتمة

بالعادة المقالة تنتهي دائما بجملة تسمى بخاتمة ، وهذه الجملة تسحب المقالة إلى النهاية وتخبر القاري أيضا بانتهائها . والخاتمة دائما تخبر القاري من جديد بالفكرة الأساسية للمقالة ولكن باستخدام كلمات وطريقة أخرى أو بتلخيص النقاط الرئيسية لها . وبالطبع يجب أن تتبع نموذج المقالة وتكون مكملة له .

الخلاصة ....

أكتب جملة في البداية تشرح فيها الفكرة الرئيسية للمقالة في الافتتاحية .... ثم أختار جمل مساندة تركز فيها على الأفكار الرئيسية .... وأنثرها بطريقة جميلة داخل المقالة ... تتخللها بالطبع جمل أخرى مختلفة مكملة للمقالة .... ولا تنسى أن تختم المقالة بعبارة خاتمة تشبه إلى حد كبير العبارة الإفتتاحية ولكن بأسلوب أو صيغة أخرى .


...Hope this will help you to write an essay
أتمنى أن ذلك الطرح يساعدك في كتابة المقال..

Best regards

we need an example,
who can help us??
essay deive