A new idea for new students in English section

[Brilliant Shores]

thaaaank u alooot on the perfect websites ya Halaha

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Brilliant Shores thaaaank u alooot on the perfect websites ya Halaha

Hiiii
Thank you for you are here
Good luck

[رغد محمد]

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
I miss you soooooooooo much friends
I’m so sorry I’ve been busy today
Thank you so much
Suzi dear you correct this sentense :
Allah protect you big brother
you put R in the word you
Why ????? I didn’t get it .
Thank you again dear

[رغد محمد]

I have alot of things that make me angry such as :
If there is some one laying on me this is not make me angry, but make me hate this person so much .
If some one misunderstood me in wrong way .And if some one judge on me without even knowing me .
Sometimes I get mad when I am in a romantic ,or quite mood ,and some one interrupt my mood .
If you really hate me you have to wake me up one day!!!!!!!!belive me that day is going to be the last day in your life .
I like who wake me up with beautiful words ,and quite.
These reasons why I get mad,and angry ??
But the most thing make me angry when I see a man tortuers a child,and I can’t do anything to this child
O Allah protect all children around the world .


correct for me Con...

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد I have alot of things that make me angry such as : If there is some one laying on (to not on ) me this is (doesn't not is not) not make me angry, but makes me hate this person so much . If some one misunderstood me in a wrong way .And if some one judge on me without even knowing me . Sometimes I get mad when I am in a romantic ,or quite mood ,and some one interrupt my mood . If you really hate me you have to wake me up one day!!!!!!!!belive me that day is going to be the last day in your life . hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I like who wake me up with beautiful words ,and quite ( u may say quietly )a. These reasons why I get mad,and angry ?? But the most thing make me angry when I see a man tortuers a child,and I can’t do anything to this child O Allah protect all children around the world . correct for me Con...

Good luck

[حلاها زايد]

unfortunately alot of things make me angry and this causes to me alot of problems in my life
I will tell you some of the things that make me angry
when I see someone hurt or hit a child and when someone injustice me and when men thinking that women just a servant cook and wash and raise the children as a machine and don't need to rest and compassion and tenderness
and when someone looks at me for along time maybe you surprised that but really this makes me very angry


do you believe that when I wrote this topic made me angry


I wish anyone to correct my mistake

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حلاها زايد unfortunately alot of things make me angry and this causes to me alot of problems in my life I will tell you some of the things that make me angry when I see someone hurt or hit a child and when someone injustice me, and when men thinking that women just a servant cook , wash ,raise the children as a machine, don't need to rest , compassion ,and tenderness Tel me about it !!!!!!!! I know and when someone looks at me for along time maybe you surprised that but really this makes me very angry hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhh weird really " do you believe that when I wrote this topic made me angry hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh h You are sooooooooooo angry .You have to be calm in sometimes ok control yourself I wish anyone to correct my mistake

listen , as I see your write is geting better ,and better,but when you wrote a list you have to put comma and in the end you put and
did you get me ???

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حلاها زايد unfortunately alot of things make me angry and this causes to me alot of problems in my life I will tell you some of the things that make me angry when I see someone hurt or hit a child and when someone injustice ( wrong) because u should use verb not noun me and when men thinking that woman just a servant , cook and wash and raise the children as a machine and dosen't need to rest and compassion and tenderness <<<i'm not sure about the usage of this word and when someone looks at me for a long time u may say , wen someone gaze at me for a long period and Allah knows the best maybe you are surprised at that but really this makes me very angry do you believe that when I wrote this topic , it made me angry I wish anyone to correct my mistake

yellow =should b dropped
the red letters= should be added
the red words =the substitute

with pleasure

any Q ask me plz

[حلاها زايد]

ragodah I'm very happy to read your writing and I will try to be here because these days I'm busy
and you are the boss here as said abdullah
keep going sweetest boss

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حلاها زايد ragodah i'm very happy to read your writing and i will try to be here because these days i'm busy and you are the boss here as abdullah said keep going sweetest boss

Thank you dear for your support
The orage color is the mistake after correct