A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

Hello dear ,
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw your essay is beautiful
If you want the truth I don’t know if this is essay ,but I want to know something ????
When we write an essay can we use "the order of time " please I want to know that .
Thank you dear really I appreciate your participation
I think your’s is very good
Allah bless you

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Hello dear , waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw your essay is beautiful If you want the truth I don’t know if this is essay ,but I want to know something ???? When we write an essay can we use "the order of time " please I want to know that . Thank you dear really I appreciate your participation I think your’s is very good Allah bless you

Thanks for your words you make me shy.
yes,we can use transition Words
((first, then,next,and finaly))

Good luck

[رغد محمد]

Good morning every body
Happy friday to everyone
today I am going to write my deive essay ,and I want your opinion OK

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My First Visit to The center of Specail Needs

Commonly I heard that any person want to see the Specail Needs it must have a strong heart especailly when they were children .
When I was in middle school I went to the Center of Specail Needs with my teachers ,and my friends.It was amazing and wonderful,but at the beginning I couldn’t enter to the center when I saw the child (not more than five years of age ) deponds on a l walking near the door of the center .I felt like my pulse of my heart stop I couldn’t breath ,too.It was so so diffecult on me,and my teachres and my friends ,too.After five minutes of crying I went to the center ,and I saw alot of chilren some of them have physical disbility ,others have mentally disabled ,and others have both of disabilities.It was so hard on us.You know there personalities is amazing,wonderful,and incurdable.
When I was there I met a handsome boy his name is Turkey .He was at 9 years old .He tuch my heart with his big mind .I played with him so much ,and I cryed when he spell my name Angham waaaaw .It was incrudable feelings especailly that my name is tuff on children to say it .It is wonderful that you affected on someone .
Really when we saw those children felt the happiness in our heart after crying at the bebinning ,and we appreciate the blessings that Allah give it to us so much .
This was an amazing visiting .It teach me that if someone feel like dosen’t have a goel in life go to any center of specail needs ,and you will see things that make you apprecaite your life more than ever .

please CO dear correct my mistakes

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد It was so so diffecult on me,and my teachres and my friends .

This is my quote

in your quote you change on into to

your reply is in page 36

[رغد محمد]

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends
I miss you sooooo much
Where are you???? no one is here!!!!! I hope you are ok??




I need more active please

I encorge you dears

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends I miss you sooooo much Where are you???? no one is here!!!!! I hope you are ok?? I need more active please I encorge you dears

I miss you, too.
Yes , you are right
we need more activities than now.
Everything , we write here will help us in our study.

[عيون عليا]

Welcome back sweety.

In my opinion , it is an amazing essay.

Your words make me sad because the children are my weakness.



keep going.

[Conscientious]

عيون عليا

this is mine , u can see it in the attachment below

and i'm sorry for being late

[رغد محمد]

Thank you dear so much

Do I have any mistakes
???
Do you have any note ???
Please tel me

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Thank you dear so much Do I have any mistakes ??? Do you have any note ??? Please tel me

In fact, I cannot correct your essay because I am still trying to be good in the writing, but in my opinion, you have a few mistakes in the spelling.I will let the correcting to our sweety teacher co .

Do not worry your writing is wonderful

Best wishes