A new idea for new students in English section

[OoفرحoO]

Can I join you I liked the idea, and I like that I develop my skills in this language:)

[Conscientious]

of course

فرح

with pleasure dear

it's our honor that u will be one of the participants in this thread

[رغد محمد]

Good morning every body

Today I’m sooooo happy because I have a new idea



This idea is going to make our English gettng better and better.It’s also help to express our feelings .

The idea is :I will give you a picture ,and you have to descrip this picture ,what do you see on it what do you feel about it .Anything you want to write about this picture is in your mind .

This is the first picture for today
I’m waiting for your respons




See you soon

[رغد محمد]

When I see this picture I see all kind of darkness,sadness,and everything bad it had happend before.But between all these feelings I see something wonderful .This thing is the light that chin and delete everything bad .I see hope after all these years of tire,hard work,and bad days .
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaw incrudable feelings I felt when I saw this amazing picture
I hope I can get my way soon as I can

.................................
I am waiting for your responds
see ya

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد When I see (look at) this picture I see all kinds of darkness,sadness,and everything bad it had happend before.But between (among) all these feelings I see something wonderful .This thing is the light that chin ( shines and deletes everything bad .I see hope after all these years of tire ( it is verb and u have to use noun , like hardship and so on ),hard work,and bad days . waaaaaaaaaaaaaaw incrudable feelings I felt when I saw this amazing picture u may say i feel of this incredible feeling once i look at this picture I hope I can get my way as soon as I can ................................. I am waiting for your responds see ya

be aware of the spelling

plz write ur essay in the WORD and then copy it here to be sure of the spelling

try to make ur essay more formal unless u just want to write regardless the rules of writing an essay

do u want me to correct ur essay as formal or informal essay ???a

Gooooood and Gooooooo ahead

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious be aware of the spelling plz write ur essay in the WORD and then copy it here to be sure of the spelling Thank you so so much I will do that next time Allah willing try to make ur essay more formal unless u just want to write regardless the rules of writing an essay I will Allah willing ,but what I wrote wasn’t essay I just write what I felt .Did you get me ?? do u want me to correct ur essay as formal or informal essay ???a Would you mind to correct it in two ways. Thank you so much for your care . Gooooood and Gooooooo ahead

Thank you sooooooooooooo much dear

Con dear I feel like I’m getting worse ,and worse in writing
I’m so sad I feel like I did not offer forward even one step.
Thank you dear for your intrest on us


I will improve my writing more ,and more Allah willing
see you soon my teacher

[عيون عليا]

Pardon me girls


I conot enter here for two weeks
(It is a long time )

because I am very busy

I will miss you

THanks for all specialy con

I will be back (god willing(

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا Pardon me girls I conot enter here for two weeks (It is a long time ) because I am very busy I will miss you THanks for all specialy con I will be back (god willing(

Allah protect you dear
We will miss you too

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Thank you sooooooooooooo much dear Con dear I feel like I’m getting worse ,and worse in writing I’m so sad I feel like I did not offer forward even one step. Thank you dear for your intrest on us I will improve my writing more ,and more Allah willing see you soon my teacher

U see Ragad , I told u before , people are two types . that's why I don't want to correct randomly for anybody without his permission
I don't want them to be frustrated as u are now , I don't know why are u frustrated ? may be because I'm correcting for u , so when u see the red color in ur text , u feel disappointed
Ok , I'll suggest something
I will correct ur paragraph informally , so that can reduce ur mistakes , if u want
Also , as I told u before try not to make spelling mistakes at all because u r not in the exam , so u can use the dictionary or Microsoft Word to make sure of the spelling
And there is a very important point which is : TRY to adhere to what u know
ألتزمي بالشي اللي تعرفيه
Whether in the grammar or the word usage
How ??a
In the grammar , use only the grammatical rules which u know and use only the simple and continuous present and past tense . Don't use the perfect tense because u may not be capable to use it because it is the most difficult tense for the beginners
In the word usage , when u want to use a new word u have to consult the dictionary to see how they use it and which part of speech it is (adj ,verb, noun …etc) and how they put in a sentence and so on . the advisable dictionary is Oxford Dictionary as a book or http://dictionary.cambridge.org/
As an online website. U know , I always use this online dictionary when I come to correct you all , it's so useful
So don't use the new words randomly

If I remember anything I'll be back to write it for u

Good luck

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Suzi Have a fantastic Evevning for every one I've just backed from prophet's mosque I spent tow days there I wouldn't want to backed from it .in fact all the traces remind you by great Messenger and how it was living in simple place and now despite the expansion there is a crowed at Al-Rawda any way I hope from God to accept all my praying and supplications and don't disappoint me اللهم آميـــــــــــــــــــــــــــ,ن C,Ya

woooooooooooooooow

u r lucky , mashaAllah tabarAllah

i hope that u took me with u looool

we miss u dear

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا Pardon me girls I conot enter here for two weeks (It is a long time ) because I am very busy I will miss you THanks for all specialy con I will be back (god willing(

may Allah protuct u dear

we will miss u so much , and i hope that u gave me ur opinion before u leave about my reply to ur Qs

but never mind , once u came back u can do that

May Allah reward u