A new idea for new students in English section

[عيون عليا]

Nice topic, I love it

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There are a lot of things make me angry ;for example,somebody Exploits my kindness for a temporary benefit, somebody criticizes me with a rude, and Indirect ways
,but I like the respectable and Polite Criticizes, somebody ignores me, or he is appearing the Lack of respect. These are several of reason make me angry.

Thanks halaha zaid

please correct me co

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا Nice topic, I love it [SIZE=6COLOR=darkorchid][/color][/size] There are a lot of things make me angry ;for example,somebody Exploits my kindness for a temporary benefit, somebody criticizes me with a rude, and Indirect ways ,but I like the respectable and Polite Criticizes (criticism), somebody ignores me, or he is appearing( showing ) the Lack of respect. These are several of reasons make me angry. Thanks halaha zaid please correct me co

yellow =should b dropped
the red letters= should be added
the red words =the substitute

u writing is wonderful , keep it up

also it's better to say ( the one who exploits me ,,, etc ) instead of (somebody exploits me ,,,etc)a

get it ?a

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حلاها زايد unfortunately alot of things make me angry and this causes to me alot of problems in my life I will tell you some of the things that make me angry when I see someone hurt or hit a child and when someone injustice ( wrong) because u should use verb not noun me and when men thinking that woman just a servant , cook and wash and raise the children as a machine and dosen't need to rest and compassion and tenderness <<<i'm not sure about the usage of this word and when someone looks at me for a long time u may say , wen someone gaze at me for a long period and Allah knows the best maybe you are surprised at that but really this makes me very angry do you believe that when I wrote this topic , it made me angry I wish anyone to correct my mistake

yellow =should b dropped
the red letters= should be added
the red words =the substitute

with pleasure

any Q ask me plz

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious yellow =should b dropped the red letters= should be added the red words =the substitute u writing is wonderful , keep it up also it's better to say ( the one who exploits me ,,, etc ) instead of (somebody exploits me ,,,etc)a get it ?a

Yes, I get it.
Oh my dear,
Thank you so much
you are a wonderful teacher.

Sincerely,

[عيون عليا]

Ok, girls
Now, I will put my first deive essay, and I hope to be good.
We should write about that to practice our skills.

My First Lovely

When I want to travel to outside I will not be confused to where I can go.

I will choose Italy directly because it is my first lovely country.

It is attracting all people to visits it; really it is an amazing country.

I cannot forget my trip to it before many years ago

It has the beautiful cities which consist of historic places.

First, I went to Rome, and I took several pictures beside

a famous Colosseum which has the beautiful Legends .

Then, I visited a great Verona which has the best love story in the world.

When I stood in the window of Juliet I imagine myself is a hero of the story.

Next, I went to the state of Tuscany. There was the world's strangest

tower. It is an italic Piza tower .There was I saw many people from

different country. They were touring inside it.

Finally, a beauty of Italy is increasing from city to another one. .

In fact , I cannot forget that a great country which

has advantages of the tourist country.

I'm excited to know my mistakes.
My questions:
1)Is my writing is deive essay or not??
2)I want to know your point of view in my writing , and your advices.
Thanks a lot in advanced
correct me co.

[رغد محمد]

Hello dear ,
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw your essay is beautiful
If you want the truth I don’t know if this is essay ,but I want to know something ????
When we write an essay can we use "the order of time " please I want to know that .
Thank you dear really I appreciate your participation
I think your’s is very good
Allah bless you

[عيون عليا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Hello dear , waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw your essay is beautiful If you want the truth I don’t know if this is essay ,but I want to know something ???? When we write an essay can we use "the order of time " please I want to know that . Thank you dear really I appreciate your participation I think your’s is very good Allah bless you

Thanks for your words you make me shy.
yes,we can use transition Words
((first, then,next,and finaly))

Good luck

[رغد محمد]

Good morning every body
Happy friday to everyone
today I am going to write my deive essay ,and I want your opinion OK

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My First Visit to The center of Specail Needs

Commonly I heard that any person want to see the Specail Needs it must have a strong heart especailly when they were children .
When I was in middle school I went to the Center of Specail Needs with my teachers ,and my friends.It was amazing and wonderful,but at the beginning I couldn’t enter to the center when I saw the child (not more than five years of age ) deponds on a l walking near the door of the center .I felt like my pulse of my heart stop I couldn’t breath ,too.It was so so diffecult on me,and my teachres and my friends ,too.After five minutes of crying I went to the center ,and I saw alot of chilren some of them have physical disbility ,others have mentally disabled ,and others have both of disabilities.It was so hard on us.You know there personalities is amazing,wonderful,and incurdable.
When I was there I met a handsome boy his name is Turkey .He was at 9 years old .He tuch my heart with his big mind .I played with him so much ,and I cryed when he spell my name Angham waaaaw .It was incrudable feelings especailly that my name is tuff on children to say it .It is wonderful that you affected on someone .
Really when we saw those children felt the happiness in our heart after crying at the bebinning ,and we appreciate the blessings that Allah give it to us so much .
This was an amazing visiting .It teach me that if someone feel like dosen’t have a goel in life go to any center of specail needs ,and you will see things that make you apprecaite your life more than ever .

please CO dear correct my mistakes

[رغد محمد]

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends
I miss you sooooo much
Where are you???? no one is here!!!!! I hope you are ok??




I need more active please

I encorge you dears

[عيون عليا]

Welcome back sweety.

In my opinion , it is an amazing essay.

Your words make me sad because the children are my weakness.



keep going.