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[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عيون عليا السلام عليكم جميعا احببت قبل ان اغادركم على امل العوده اليكن قريبا ان شاء الله ان اكتب عن الصوره الرائعه التي وضعتها رغد محمد فعبرت بطريقه الخاصه أأمل ان اكون قد احسنت الكتابه.. When I Look at this picture ;I feel it have depressed feeling like me. That black clouds will rainnig black rain. It is not carries doesn't carry ) the good things for the earth. Also, our life which have(has) a lot of that black clouds. At the same time , no wonder if I say (in(at) the end of the tunnel there is a light ) because there is a suspension bridge is giving us the hope ,but we are waiting a lot even to complete the building of (that) bridge. However, we should Strengthen our Patience in this life. please correct me co Sweety teacher

Good luck

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious good Q u siad between all these feelings so here u mentioned that there are a lot of feelings not only 2 kinds of feelings so u have to use ( between ) if there are two things and something between them but among if there are a lot of things and something is envolved with them although in Arabic we use the same word in both cases, in English the case is different got it

Thank you my lovely teacher
I get it its huge different between them.

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

ماشاء الله عليكم
يبدو فاتنى الشي الكثير فى غيابي
:)
الله يوفقكم والى الامام ونشوف الجميع متخرج سعيد يارب

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن ماشاء الله عليكم يبدو فاتنى الشي الكثير فى غيابي :) الله يوفقكم والى الامام ونشوف الجميع متخرج سعيد يارب

Hiiiiii Abdullah
I am so happy that you are comeback safety...
I hope you are ok too
I miss your smile sooooooooooo much just when I see it I looked like this




Welcome back brother

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Hiiiiii Abdullah I am so happy that you are comeback safety... I hope you are ok too I miss your smile sooooooooooo much just when I see it I looked like this Welcome back brother

thank you sister ragad
:)
I was come back to saudi arabia because my Mather has a bad health .so I was stopped my trip and come back ,but to day she is good
thanks god
plz pray for her
I cannot live without her
she is my spirit in this life.she is the thing that I love life because of her.

...............

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن thank you sister ragad :) I was come back to saudi arabia because my Mather has a bad health .so I was stopped my trip and come back ,but to day she is good thanks god plz pray for her I cannot live without her she is my spirit in this life.she is the thing that I love life because of her. ...............

I’m so so so so sorry about your mother so much .I will pray for her without of permission. She is a mother.
You made me feel so so sad .I hope she is better now really I hope from all my deepest heart .Please take care of her. She is your Heaven.
I’m so proud of you that you back just for your mother not all men do that.
Is she good today???

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

Conscientious


بكتب بالعربي عشان اقدر اعبر واوفيك يحقك
الله يسعدك على عملك الطيب هذا وصبرك وتصحيحك
وهذا يدل على معدنك الطيب يااختى
وحبك للخير
اشكرك من كل قلبي واسال الله لك التوفيق
بصراحة محد يسوي مثلك
بجد مو قادر اعبر لشكرك
واى شي تشوفية عندي غلط عدلينى ع طول بدون ماستتأذنى
دمتى بخير وعافية
والله يوفقك
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شكرا شكرا شكرا يارغد
:)

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن Conscientious بكتب بالعربي عشان اقدر اعبر واوفيك يحقك الله يسعدك على عملك الطيب هذا وصبرك وتصحيحك وهذا يدل على معدنك الطيب يااختى وحبك للخير اشكرك من كل قلبي واسال الله لك التوفيق بصراحة محد يسوي مثلك بجد مو قادر اعبر لشكرك واى شي تشوفية عندي غلط عدلينى ع طول بدون ماستتأذنى دمتى بخير وعافية والله يوفقك ــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ ـــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ :)

Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx a lot my brother

may Allah bless

i hope that u can benefit well from my correction

Good luck

[رغد محمد]

Dear Con I have two Q
The first Q in the first essay
I wrote “not more than five years of age “the word “age” you change it to “old “
What the different???
And the second Q is you said I have to write my essay in formal way .How I can do that??
Thank you soooo much …

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Dear Con I have two Q The first Q in the first essay I wrote “not more than five years of age “the word “age” you change it to “old “ What the different???difference actually , i don't know what is the difference since i don't think that we can say (years of age ) but i changed it to old because we usually say for example he is three years old And the second Q is you said I have to write my essay in formal way .How I can do that?? Thank you soooo much … this is an imprtant Q formal means رسمي informal means غير رسمي

there is a lot of rules can make ur essay informal or formal

when u write Woooooooow , this is informal

when u say It is fabulous , this is formal

usually we use formal with our frinds and closed people

and we use informal with teatures , and superior and strange people and so on

i'll try to look for a lesson about that

good luck