::: دروس خصوصية منهجية لمادة Writing 2 Lane-216 :::

[الفتى]

J s

Thank you so much

I thought that i'm good in my essay loooool

never mine, I'll be right it again and I'll do my best


god pless you

[رويده عباس]

أتمنى أن يثبت من قبل المشرفين الأفاضل للفائدة

[مايا]

هاي ياسمين..
شكرا لمجهودك الرائع ..
انا ساخد رايتنغ 2 الترم الجاي ومتخوفه جدا منه ..اتمنى اعرف منكم محتوى الماده والمطلوب
تحياتي
مايا

[مملكة عمري]

Maya
writing 2 contains three kinds for essay
1- comparison & contrast
2- causes & effects
3-argumentative essay

then you have
summary
paraphrasing
direct quoting

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Rowaydah
hello dear
our writing book is:
(College Writing Skills with Reading)

The grammar book from my opinion:
the green book that we've taken in (ELCA)
and
(Interaction Grammar)
I hope you get the advantages from them

Alfata,
you are welcome
you are actully good but as what we all need (some improvment)
go a head brother

Rowaydah,
thanks your suggestion

Maya,
hello
you are so welcome
I think dear Mamlakat Omri answered your Qs
and insha'a Allah I will bring all the lessons here


Mamlakat Omri,
thank you dear
I hope to see you always here :)

JS

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

Hi all

the last two essays of the first lesson

The first

Where to Go on Vacation: The Beach or the City It is a fact that not all the people have the opportunity to go on vacation. The ones who have the facilities like to go out of town once in a while in order to leave their worries behind. When we go on vacation, we have to decide the best place to go according to what we have in mind. The purpose of this essay is to contrast the differences between vacation at a beach or in a city. We will look at the kinds of activities, the clothing required and the pace of life available while vacationing on the beach or in the city. The first major difference between vacationing on the beach or in a city is the kind of activities you are able to do. On the beach, for example, you can go sailing, fishing, surfing, skiing, or take advantage of the sun and lie in the sand to get tan, or even in some cases feed sharks and swim with dolphins. On the other hand, in a city you can visit different sites such as museums, theaters, important buildings, downtown, among other things. This means that you have many places to know and you will need much more time and organization in a city than on the beach. Another difference between vacationing on the beach or in a city is the clothing and equipment you need to take with you. If you decide to go to the beach, you will have to take mainly a bathing suit, shorts, short-sleeve shirts, sandals, sunglasses, goggles, and sun block. Considering that you are going to the city where you will have to walk a lot, you will need comfortable and casual clothing such as jeans and tennis shoes. You will also have to take fancy clothes in case you want to go, for example, to watch a play. The final difference between vacationing on the beach or in a city is the pace of life. If you want a relaxing plan, your option will be the beach. When you are on the beach you just let things happen while in the city you will have to schedule all your activities in order to have time to visit the different sites you want to. In conclusion, here you have these differences to consider when deciding where to go on vacation. Although both places are interesting and exciting, it all depends on what you are looking for. Keep in mind that wherever you decide to go you will enjoy it.

The second

Contrast Between Backpacking or Staying in Hotels Traveling is one of the favorite hobbies almost all people have. There are several ways for traveling around the world, and they all include some good things and some bad things. Backpacking and staying in hotels are two of the most common ways of traveling, that’s why they are used by most people. The major differences that could be discussed between these two ways of traveling are the costs, the safety of the staying, and the availability of plans. Backpacking has been used by teenagers for a long time, and it has become really famous among young people who don’t have a lot of money for traveling. By backpacking people could save a lot of money and travel with less money than what they would need for paying a hotel. As the travelers will need to sleep in a hostel, there will always be the issue of insecurity, as any kind of people could enter and sleep in a hostel. Hostels are not always available as there are a lot of people who use them, so change of plans will always be a possibility in this way of traveling. People who rely on backpacking for their trips should always have a backup plan. Hotels are one of the most comfortable ways of traveling, but only if you have enough money. This way of traveling is mostly used by families and people who are wealthy enough to pay for good hotels. By staying at a hotel people will spend more money than they would spend in a hostel; of course a hotel will provide a high level of security to the traveler. To stay at most hotels, you need reservations, and once you have them you can rely on a place to sleep every night. In this way of traveling no backup plan is needed. The two possibilities discussed above are really good; everything depends on the economic possibilities of every person. Personally I recommend staying at hotels even if they do not have an excellent quality because the services you get in exchange for your money could be the difference between having a good trip or a perfect mess.

*The essay from eslbee

Please, read and rewrite them

all the best to us yaRab

JS

[رويده عباس]

thank you Js

and my suggestion is nothing for this useful topic

[رويده عباس]

شكرا للمشرفين الأفاضل

[الفتى]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مملكة عمري Maya writing 2 contains three kinds for essay 1- comparison & contrast 2- causes & effects 3-argumentative essay then you have summary paraphrasing direct quoting

ياليت لو احد يشرح لي ببساطة عن الأنواع الثلاثة للـ essay

لأني ماني فاهم شي .. ابغاكم تتحملو ذكائي شوي الله يسعدكم ..


دمتم بود ..

[مملكة عمري]

ان شاء الله يالفتى قريب
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