اذا كانت لغتك الانجليزيه ركيكه ارجوك لاتدخل!!!

[رويده عباس]

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I want to say to you congratulation for your good mark hope you get well in English major and I am sure you well

thanks a lot

and about how you wrote the topic you was not rude but a little bit

drastic and maybe that a good thing I don't know

any way , god pless you

[malak_2100]

Dear Brothers & Sisters,

I think we are going to improve our skills of our language by keeping replaying and responding to fight for our opinion till the end.

[cappuccino]

Salams to you all,0
I really enjoyed correcting this...0
The mistakes are underlined and the corrections are in red.0



Hey you, listen
this form is used in spoken language , not in written language
maybe you even should've said: yo wassaaaaap

To you all……girls and boys
sounds like a hip-hop/rap song heheheheeee

I have something to say….will you just stop complaining all the time
and work on yourself selves for plural…

I was am really shocked …why are you here?0

Are you looking for an Exam sheet?0 or do you just like to stay behind your screen and complaining most of the time?0 complain all the time, AND you complain in Arabic instead of improving your English language and working as a group work
no need for the word WORK here, and this sentense is irrelevent to the subject matter.0
are you talking about writing in English or are you talking about our too many complaints?0

You can't even write some simple sentences in English…
Show me what you got
slang/black American English. It is better to say: show me what you have

It's really funny the way you write in English, I think some DOCTORS were right, save your money and change your major
wow, I agree

I wonder why you write in Arabic instead of English
here you sound like a cruel teacher in a boarding school, LOL
there is nothing to make you shy
How are you going to improve your English when what? your sentense is incomplete

When we make mistakes we learn…everyone does
being the wise one :).

The funny thing is that when someone starts writing in English, you think he is trying to show off
yeah they said the same thing about me in the other forum and they asked me to translate!0

Our major is English, and but we communicate in Arabic here
Strange things it's better to say: so strange

I think this forum is for the students whom major is English
Am I wrong
here you sound poetic, nice touch

Well, I won't reply to anyone who writes me in Arabic
wow, now he's threatening us, guys

By the way…it's a good thing if you find some mistakes here
Please don't hesitate, you may correct them if you want
I will appreciate that

yeah thanks!! I really enjoyed this

,with my regards
Cappuccino

[شذى الوادي]

Wow cappuccino you are great in your corrections .
However you have an obvious mistake in your writing.
I will give you all a chance to find out this mistake , Cappuccino you have a chance to correct your mistake before others do .
Let’s see who is the first one can find out this mistake ?
With best regards

[NowOrNever]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة cappuccino Salams to you all,0 I really enjoyed correcting this...0 The mistakes are underlined and the corrections are in red.0 Hey you, listen this form is used in spoken language , not in written language maybe you even should've said: yo wassaaaaap To you all……girls and boys sounds like a hip-hop/rap song heheheheeee I have something to say….will you just stop complaining all the time and work on yourself selves for plural… I was am really shocked …why are you here?0 Are you looking for an Exam sheet?0 or do you just like to stay behind your screen and complaining most of the time?0 complain all the time, AND you complain in Arabic instead of improving your English language and working as a group work no need for the word WORK here, and this sentense is irrelevent to the subject matter.0 are you talking about writing in English or are you talking about our too many complaints?0 You can't even write some simple sentences in English… Show me what you got slang/black American English. It is better to say: show me what you have It's really funny the way you write in English, I think some DOCTORS were right, save your money and change your major wow, I agree I wonder why you write in Arabic instead of English here you sound like a cruel teacher in a boarding school, LOL there is nothing to make you shy How are you going to improve your English when what? your sentense is incomplete When we make mistakes we learn…everyone does being the wise one :). The funny thing is that when someone starts writing in English, you think he is trying to show off yeah they said the same thing about me in the other forum and they asked me to translate!0 Our major is English, and but we communicate in Arabic here Strange things it's better to say: so strange I think this forum is for the students whom major is English Am I wrong here you sound poetic, nice touch Well, I won't reply to anyone who writes me in Arabic wow, now he's threatening us, guys By the way…it's a good thing if you find some mistakes here Please don't hesitate, you may correct them if you want I will appreciate that yeah thanks!! I really enjoyed this ,with my regards Cappuccino

Just put this in your mind!!
Before you correct other's mistakes you should mind yours!!
If you want to learn a new language you should accept corrections even when they are wrong!! You have to be careful about your spelling mistakes next time!

Salams…..you mean Salaam no need for s
Sentense….Sentence
Irrelevent….Irrelevant

Well, you proved my point here, I appreciate your corrections even when they were wrong!
I appreciate the work that you have done!! Creating a new nick name, correcting my mistakes…I am sure you had fun looooool please don't give up there are many post s which need to be corrected loooooooool I lreaned a lot from you, I will make sure next time, hope I won't do the same mistakes again looool
There is a different between formal and informal written…
I wasn't trying to write an essay here looooooooool
How did you know I was or I am shocked…now I am shocked from the way you corrected my post, I don't know maybe you were trying to prove something in your mind which would never exist loooooool

I am EXTERNAL STUDENT, do you think 2 weeks are enough for us!!
I was looking for tutor, from now on, I will make sure there's someone like you who corrects my mistakes, hope you do correct other's mistakes too looool

Thanks my Brother I mean my sister, hope to see you posting comment next time, and don't worry I won't correct your mistakes if that would bother you..

[المسلم العربي]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

Brother Cappuccino..

It is not allowed in Islam to abbreviate the saying of Salam.

Say Assalamu Alaikum at least.

This is a mistake I had to correct.

Take care.

[cappuccino]

Thank you ALL for your comments.0
Yes, the biggest mistake I had was SENTENCES. I always make a mistake with that one, confusing it with senses.0

And I also asked about the abrev. of the Islamic greeting, and it's true, I shouldn't write it like that.0

And finally Ms. Now, thank you for taking it lightly. We are here to get educated and to have fun at the same time I hope there were no hard feelings. I tryed to make it funny.0

And if I correct all the mistakes I will really be stuck at my screen 24/7.LOL
But I will try to help out as much as I can, so don't hesitate (any one of you) whenever you need help.0
WE ALL DO!!!)

P.S. Don't fuss about exclamtion marks here, they just get messed up!0

And finally I'm not a guy, I'm a gal.0
EXTERNAL too!0

wassalamu 3alaikum wara7matullah

[شذى الوادي]

I will give you another chance and to make it easy the mistake in grammar it’s not in the spilling or the way she corrects .
Please …………………….
I want you all to think about it.
So again let’s see Who is the first ?

[NowOrNever]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رويده عباس :quote I want to say to you congratulation for your good mark hope you get well in English major and I am sure you well thanks a lot and about how you wrote the topic you was not rude but a little bit drastic and maybe that a good thing I don't know any way , god pless you

Thank you my sister
Trust me this is the best way to make an attention
you are such a nice person
My allah bless you

[NowOrNever]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة malak_2100 Dear Brothers & Sisters, I think we are going to improve our skills of our language by keeping replaying and responding to fight for our opinion till the end.

we are not fighting here
we are brothers and sisters
we came here to learn and to improve our skills
doesn't matter if you agreed with what I have said
in the ends we are students came here to learn from our mistakes
thanks for passing by