A new idea for new students in English section

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Allah with you...I have tuns of Qs 1\Informal: May use first, second, or third person. Formal: Write in third person (except in business letters where first person may be used Sorry what are you mean with first, second, third person?? first person= i , we second person = u third person= they , he , she , it ……………………………………. 2\Informal: May use clichés (loads of, conspicuous by absence, etc.) Formal: Avoid clichés (use many, was absent, etc.) What is clichés means?? I looked for it but I did not find the meaning. هي كلمات مبتذله عاميه تستخدم كثيرا بين الشعب لا تصلح ان تكتب في المقال ومادمتي لم تعيشي في الخارج لتكتسبي هذه المصطلحات فلا تقلقي :) للمزيد انظري هذا الرابط http://esl.about.com/od/vocabularyre...a/v_cliche.htm ……………………………………….. 3\Informal: May address readers using second person pronouns (you, your, etc) Formal: Avoid addressing readers using second person pronouns (use one, one’s, the reader, the reader’s, etc.) Can you explain more??Do you mean like this: Your friend, The writer, Do we use it in the end of the letter?? No , inside the essay i'll give an example in writing 2 exam , they asked us to write about what is the advantages of mintaining ur GPA high ما هي فوائد المحافظة على معدلك عالي ؟ so most of us wrote about themselves according to the Q which refers to our GPA Example when i mintain my GPA high , i will satisfy my parents and .....etc then the teacher said no , i don't want u to use the first person in ur essay but u can say when the student mintains her GPA high , she will .....etc so here we used the third person (she)a يعني لازم تبتعدي عن الفرست والسكند بيرسون في الاسي …………………………………………. 4\Informal: May use imperative voice (e.g. Remember….) Formal: Avoid imperative voice (use Please refer to.….) Can you give me more examples?? ^^^ don't care about this rule it doesn't concern us …………………………… Choose the style of writing keeping in mind what you are writing and to whom. But whichever style you write in – formal or informal – be sure to keep it consistent, do not mix the two This is very important notice .I will keep it in my mind. Thank you...Thank you...Thank you I don’t know what to say to thank you, but I will say Allah make your life full of happiness with the people who you love. Thank you my awesome teacher.

u r most welcome

anytime

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد It’s very good idea, but I cannot write it, and put it here now because its need more thinking, engineering, and creativity in order to be the result satisfactory. So when I finish my essay I will write it here .deal?? I want you, and Abdullah to write too deal??? Even five sentence .Ok Thank you dear soooooooo much.

Nooooooooo , this is unfair

how i can be a teacher and a student at the same time a

please Ragudah exempt me from doing that

I have a lot of works to do beside correcting for u and explaining many grammatical rules

I'll run away loooooool

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

فيرست بيرسون
و
سكيند بيرسون
وثيردبيرسون

يازين الاطرش بالزفة
هههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه
بصراحة مو مركز ومااستوعبتها

بس يارب ماندرس هاذي الدروس عند طارق سيدا
بيخلينا نطلع سيدا مضبوط مع بوابة الجامعة

اسف خربت الشرح بس اخر مرة اكتب بالعربي
:)
:)

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious Nooooooooo , this is unfair how i can be a teacher and a student at the same time a please Ragudah exempt me from doing that I have a lot of works to do beside correcting for u and explaining many grammatical rules I'll run away loooooool

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh

I’m so sorry dear I don’t mean upset you, or make you sad, or the most important thing “make you run away from this page “noooooooooooooooooooo
I beg you don’t do that.
Please don’t do that.
Ok, don’t write anything, but we need you soooooooo much.
I just want to see your write to know more that’s it, and I did not mean what you said “how I can be a teacher and a student at the same time” I just want from you sharing your knowledge that’s it.
I’m sorry dear .I hope from you except my apology.

[Conscientious]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
loooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

ok Ragudah never mind and if u want to see my style of writing plz check up my respond to

عيون عليا

شوفي الملف المرفق اللي سميته بأسمها
مرررررررررررره مفيد كتبت طريقتي باللون الاحمر بس بنفس افكارها زي ما طلبت
وهي باللون البنفسجي

وشوفي الفرق

[Conscientious]

رغوده وينك ابغاك تردين على ردي اللي فوق + تردين على ردي حق الاسئله الله لا يهينك ههههههههههه

عشان اعرف فهمتي اجاباتي ولا لا ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious u r most welcome anytime

Thank you dear I understand every word you said it.

Thank you so much.

[إلهام]

Good morning every body


Today I would like to write some statements that I love very much and they are for any one who want to be successful ...

begin by the name of Allah


plan while others are playing

study while others are sleeping

decide while others are delaying

prepare while others are daydreaming

begin while others are procrastinating

work while others are wishing

save while others are wasting

listen while others are talking

smile while others are frowning

commend while others are criticizing

persist while others are quitting


the last one is >...

read while Elham is writing .. hhhh
ok now ,,what r ur opinion about these statements ....are they great ... if they so .. u have to put them always in front of your eyes

best regards for all

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن فيرست بيرسون و سكيند بيرسون وثيردبيرسون يازين الاطرش بالزفة هههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههههه بصراحة مو مركز ومااستوعبتها بس يارب ماندرس هاذي الدروس عند طارق سيدا بيخلينا نطلع سيدا مضبوط مع بوابة الجامعة اسف خربت الشرح بس اخر مرة اكتب بالعربي :) :)

Don’t worry you are going to take it in the future
hhhhhhh
So study very well

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You have to stop writing with Arabic langauge please write in English langauge .It is good for you.
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I hope your mother is good today .
I pray for her all the time

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I want to see your essay soon as you can
the topic for today is :
write an essay about The important of English langauge

see you soon
:)

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة إلهام Good morning every body Good morning to you dear . we miss you sooooo much where have you been ?? Today I would like to write some statements that I love very much and they are for any one who want to be successful ... begin by the name of Allah plan while others are playing study while others are sleeping decide while others are delaying prepare while others are daydreaming begin while others are procrastinating work while others are wishing save while others are wasting listen while others are talking smile while others are frowning commend while others are criticizing persist while others are quitting the last one is >... read while Elham is writing .. hhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhh ok now ,,what r ur opinion about these statements ....are they great ... if they so .. u have to put them always in front of your eyes best regards for all

It is honest,encouraging words

Thank you dear sooo much I memorise it in my note book .
really I appreciate your words alot .