A new idea for new students in English section

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Thoughts…. Sometimes when you think you own this world…. You have the key of everything ….. You control the people around you …. You know the answer of any question…. You are the light that( in which) every person looks up to be like you …. You are the happiness for the people around you … You are the helper for everyone … You have faith in yourself….. Just…… One mistake from you and you will( will lead u to) see all kinds of hated( hatred), jealousy, envy, and disappoiment from the people whom you love, and care (about)a … So you have to be a strong person to face all kinds of people... You have to be like the high tree that is attacked by all people… I mean be the high tree, and do not be the one who scaled(vague word) ….

wonderful Ragudah

keep up ur work

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن معليش على التصحيح علما محد طلب منى بس حبيت اتفلسف واشارك :) ابلة كون تصحيحي صح؟

thoughts….
Sometimes when you think you are the owner of this world….

both of u and Ragad are correct

You have the keys of everything …..

both are correct

You have control the people around you ….

u r wrong , why did u add HAVE?a

You know the answers of any question….

both are correct

You are the light that every person looks up to be like you ….
u r excellent

You have the happiness for the people around you …

i think Ragad's sentence is better

you the helper for everyone …
you have faith in yourself…..
Just……
one mistake from you make you will see all kinds of hated,

Excellent MashaAllah, but u need to replace (will) before MAKE so the sentence will be

one mistake from u will make u see all ....etc



Good job

[رغد محمد]

Thank you dear
You are wonderful teacher
I’m sorry about my mistakes I wrote it when I was sad, and I did not saw my mistakes.
Really...I thank you from my deepest hard
I have Qs
Why did you change this word “hated” to “hatred”?
What do you mean with this “vague word”? I mean you didn’t understand it or we cannot use in this sentence or what??
Allah protects you dear.

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Thank you dear You are wonderful teacher I’m sorry about my mistakes I wrote it when I was sad, and I did not saw my mistakes. Really...I thank you from my deepest hard I have Qs Why did you change this word “hated” to “hatred”? coz there is no word called hated there is hate and it's verb and hated is the verb in the past and hatred is the noun here u want to use noun , right? it's so obvious from ur speech What do you mean with this “vague word”? I mean you didn’t understand it or we cannot use in this sentence or what?? Allah protects you dear.

yes , to tell the truth i didn't understand it

say it in arabic

Good luck

[رغد محمد]

hhhhhhhhhh
Hiiiiiiiiiii dear
Thank you so much for correction

ياقلبي أنا..
كنت اقصد كوني الشجرة العالية ولا تكوني المتسلقة عليها

sorry I forgot to write "on it" sorry

So what is the correct word??or sentence??

[Conscientious]

If I were u , i would write

be the high tree and not the one who climbs it

بس غريبه استخدمتي scale

سكيل معناه ميزان

شكررررررررررا على محاولاتك الجادة

[رغد محمد]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Thank you
بصراحة دورت على الكلمة في قوقل ترجمة وطلت معاي كذا ..
Sorry
Thank you again
Do you have any suggestion for writing or learn a new thing or something dear??

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

:)
a good trying
الاخت رغد صدقينى مستواك جدا ممتاز ماشاء الله
ولعلمك اتحدي يكون فية احد لسا مادرس ولا مادة انجليزية ويكتب بالشكل وعندي حصيلة الهائلة من الكلمات
اتوقع والله بتصيري متميزة لانة باين عليك ذكية ومندفعة ومتلفة لتعلم اللغة
ماشاء الله تبارك الله
انا مو بمستواك ولكن يارب نتوفق ونتخرج
ونصيحة قوقل لاتعتمدي علية كثير لانة ورطنى مرة لمن كنت اتفلسف بموقع عالمى مشهور وبالاخير طلع كل كلامى غلط
بس خذى منة الكلمة وترجمييها على الوافي اذا طلعت نفس اللى تبية تمام
بس عندي لك قاموس افضل فى استخراج الكلمات ويقولك هذى اسم ولا فعل ولا ضرف هو القاموس الداخلى للوافى

اعجبنتى محاولاتك للوصول فأسأل الله يوفقنا وياك ويوفق جميع الاخوان-ات والابلة كون
وانا متابع لكم بس بدون اتصال جالس اشوف الاماكن اللى سافرت لها على اليوتيوب بس خسارة ماتهنيت
:)

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

ابلة كون
شكرا شكرا شكرا على تفاعلك ومجودك الكبير
عسا الله يوفقك ياابلة
بجد مو عارف اعبر عن شكرك

[Conscientious]

i think i told do about my all secrets in one reply

i want u to check it up

i feel that u just read it quickly , coz u did the same mistake that i have told u how to avoid it

i'm waiting for u