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[رويده عباس]

سلامة أمك يا ياسمين ماتشوف شر

[البحر الأحمر]

والله وبعد توفيق الله عديت رايتنق تو بمعدل 80% المسألة ابسط من كل الكلام اللي قلتوووه .. ياخي السر في هذي المادة هو انك تحفظ تعبير او اثنين عن مواضيع زي الكمبيوتر الزواج وتكتبهم وتكرر في كتابتهم لحد ما تحفظهم زي اسمك وراح تجيب معدل حلو .. انا جربت هالطريقة ونجحت معاي في رايتنق ون ورايتنق تو.....

عدم كتابة مواضيع تطلب من الأعضاء مراسلة كاتب الموضوع في حالة رغبتهم بـ الحصول على ملخصات أو أسئلة و أبحوث , فيجب وضع الملخصات في المنتديات المخصصه لها , أو مراسلة الإدارة لوضعها في المكان المخصص لها .

[الفتى]

ما شألله عليك اخوي البحر الأحمر مبرووووك وعقبالنا يا رب

بس اخوي ياليت تنزل التعابير اللي انت ذاكرها بالموضوع هذا عشان الجميع

يستفيد منها .. أحسن ما نمسك طااااابووور طويل على ماسنجرك ومتى يجينا الدور .

الموضوع هذا مكتوب من اختنا ياسمين خصيصاً لمادة الرايتنق2 واي شي يتعلق بالمادة

واللي عندو شي يحس انو يفيدنا ينزلو بدون استأذان ..


دمت عزيزاً غالياً ..

[مملكة عمري]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة البحر الأحمر والله وبعد توفيق الله عديت رايتنق تو بمعدل 80% المسألة ابسط من كل الكلام اللي قلتوووه .. ياخي السر في هذي المادة هو انك تحفظ تعبير او اثنين عن مواضيع زي الكمبيوتر الزواج وتكتبهم وتكرر في كتابتهم لحد ما تحفظهم زي اسمك وراح تجيب معدل حلو .. انا جربت هالطريقة ونجحت معاي في رايتنق ون ورايتنق تو..... عدم كتابة مواضيع تطلب من الأعضاء مراسلة كاتب الموضوع في حالة رغبتهم بـ الحصول على ملخصات أو أسئلة و أبحوث , فيجب وضع الملخصات في المنتديات المخصصه لها , أو مراسلة الإدارة لوضعها في المكان المخصص لها .

لا ماعندنا ذا الكلام يمكن يمشي حاله عندكم بس مو عند الطالبات
تجينا مواضيع غير متوقعه
عموما اختنا js ماقصرت راح تفيد اللي يبى يتعلم هالمادة
الله يجزاها خيير

[رويده عباس]

اللي يحفظ مواضيع ويرجع ينسخها ما راح يستفيد ابداااا

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Rowaydah,
Mamlakat Omri,
all thanks to Allah, my mother is fine now
Thanks your support dears.

Albahr Al-Ahmr,
congratulation masha'a Allah, part of your method is true but the other part doesn't fit with us as what my dear Mamlakat Omri said that our department brings unexpected topics, so we can't memorize specific essays as what you did.

Alfata,
you are right brother. if anyone has a beneficial thing can help us, please don't hesitate to bring them here to all students.


God willing, We will complete the rest of the lessons
The next lesson is going to be about

Cause and Effect Essay

JASMINE

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Cause and Effect Essay


What is a cause and effect essay?

Cause and effect essays are concerned with why things happen (causes) and what happens as a result (effects). Cause and effect is a common method of organizing and discussing ideas.

Follow these steps when writing a cause and effect essay

1. Distinguish between cause and effect.

To determine causes, ask, "Why did this happen?"

To identify effects, ask, "What happened because of this?"

The following is an example of one cause producing one effect:

Cause
You are out of gas.
Effect
Your car won't start.

Sometimes, many causes contribute to a single effect or many effects may result from a single cause. (Your instructor will specify which cause/effect method to use.) The following are examples:

Causes
liked business in high school salaries in the field are high have an aunt who is an accountantam good with numbers
Effect
choose to major in accounting
Cause
reduce work hours
Effects
less incomeemployer is irritatedmore time to studymore time for family and friends

However, most situations are more complicated.

The following is an example of a chain reaction:

1. Thinking about friend…forgot to buy gas…car wouldn't start…missed math exam…failed math course.

1. Develop your thesis statement. State clearly whether you are discussing causes, effects, or both. Introduce your main idea, using the terms "cause" and/or "effect."

1. Find and organize supporting details. Back up your thesis with relevant and sufficient details that are organized. You can organize details in the following ways:

• Chronological. Details are arranged in the order in which the events occurred.
• Order of importance. Details are arranged from least to most important or vice versa.
• Categorical. Details are arranged by dividing the topic into parts or categories

1. Use appropriate transitions. To blend details smoothly in cause and effect essays, use the transitional words and phrases listed below.

For causes

because, due to, on cause is, another is, since, for, first, second

For Effects

consequently, as a result, thus, resulted in, one result is, another is, therefore


When writing your essay, keep the following suggestions in mind:

• Remember your purpose. Decide if your are writing to inform or persuade.
• Focus on immediate and direct causes (or effects.) Limit yourself to causes that are close in time and related, as opposed to remote and indirect causes, which occur later and are related indirectly

.

• Strengthen your essay by using supporting evidence. Define terms, offer facts and statistics, or provide examples, anecdotes, or personal observations that support your ideas.

• Qualify or limit your statements about cause and effect.

Unless there is clear evidence that one event is related to another, qualify your statements with phrases such as "It appears that the cause was" or "It seems likely" or "The evidence may indicate" or "Available evidence suggests."


To evaluate the effectiveness of a cause and effect essay, ask the following questions:


What are the causes? What are the effects? Which should be emphasized? Are there single or multiple causes? Single or multiple effects? Is a chain reaction involved?


I hope you understand

JS

[الفتى]

ابكتب بالأنجليزي " الله لا يحرمنا منك " .. جلست ساعتين اكتب وامسح هههههههههههه

وبلآخير ماقدرت اترجمها ههههههههههههه

من جد فهمت الشرح صح الله يسعدك ويوفقك يا رب ..

[لـــندســـي لـــوهـــان]

thank u so much

we got a rich informations

go ahead my sister

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

Alfata,
Lendsi,

welcome 1000

thanks your replies :)

Let us see the models of the new kind of essays

Cause and Effect essay

First

Causes Essay

The Causes of Poverty in Mexico Are you aware that 20 million people in Mexico live on less than two dollars a day? Sixty million people, half the Mexican population, live in poverty, and 20 million of them live in extreme poverty. Most of the time, garbage is their food, and some days, they don’t even eat anything. This critical situation in Mexico is caused by individual, geographic and political factors. The purpose of this essay is to analyze these three main causes of poverty in Mexico. The first and immediate cause of poverty in Mexico is the individual condition. This cause refers to circumstances and characteristics of poor people. For example, the amount of education, skill, intelligence, health, and prejudice all have an influence on poverty . The lack of education is one of the most significant factors that contributes to poverty. There is no access to jobs for non-educated people. The second cause of poverty has to do with geography. For example, statistics show that people who live in rural areas far away from the cities are poorer. This is caused by the lack of communication and transportation in remote rural areas. Because of this, governments can’t provide essential services such as potable water, affordable food, primary health care, and education. People who live there are totally isolated from the rest of the society. The third and most significant cause of poverty in Mexico is the political economy of the country. The International Monetary Fund and World Bank-prescribed structural adjustment policies have been applied in Mexico because the government doesn’t carry out enough policies to encourage successful development. They cannot, for these international institutions lend money to Mexico on the condition that the nation open up its economy and cut social expenditures to repay the loans. The IMF and World Bank programs are supposed to reduce poverty, but actually they are increasing it. Unless the Mexican government works on the causes of the poverty which are the individual condition, the geographic factor, and the political economy of the country, the problem is going to get worse. Nobody likes to see poor children eating out of garbage cans. Mexico needs a new political economy designed by Mexican economists and politicians, people who are committed to Mexico and to the future of its society.

Second

Effect essay

The Effects of Being a Foreign Student Usually becoming a foreign student in order to study in another city can change your life in many aspects. Living in a city far away from home can bring many consequences and effects which almost always change a student’s form of life. When I became a foreign student, many things changed or had to change. You do not live with your family, so usually you have to learn how to live in harmony with others, how to do things by yourself, how to move to other places, etc. Being a foreign makes you learn a lot of things, but at the beginning it can be somewhat difficult, as it happened to me. That is why the purpose of this paper is to discuss the three main effects of being a foreign student. The main effect and the one that affects you most is the fact that you do not live with your parents and in your house, which means that you will not enjoy its commodities. It was so good when your mom d for you, and when the house maid used to make your bed. Your dad took you to school, and when classes finished, you returned to your room and made yourself completely comfortable. But becoming a foreign student implies that you will live in a dormitory or that you will rent an apartment. Usually you have to take care of dirty dishes, messy rooms, and ng. This means you have to learn many new things, like how to cook several dishes. In a few words, you have to learn how to be independent. Another effect is that you have to find your way around the city, so you have to know the main parts of the city. If you have a car, it may be easier to explore the city. You can just get lost and see where each street takes you, and then find a way back home. But if you don’t have a car, you need to learn how to get around by walking, in buses, or with taxis. For this you may find out about bus routes or find out how much costs to use taxis, and in this way you can plan the time it will take you to get from your house to school, for example. This will force you to plan your time better, and maybe you will have less available time along the day. This may decrease the time you have to make homework or to hang out with your friends, for example. But over time, you learn how to plan your activities in a better way. A foreign student may also find himself feeling somewhat lonely, since arriving in a new city means you don’t know anyone. You may be lucky if another friend from your city comes with, but usually you are alone. It is important to start meeting people and making friends. In this way it will be much easier to get used to being a foreign student. You will have new people with who to hang with, with whom to go to parties. Besides you won’t have to be quiet all the time in classes like when you don’t know someone. Sometimes friends can also help you in a lot of situations, like when you have problems about running out of money, when you need to go to your house quickly but you don’t have a car, or when you need to get something that is not easily found. But most of all, with friends you can have a great time and learn a lot of things. Leaving your house and going to another city to study is an experience in your life that cannot be compared to any other experience in your life. You learn how to be independent, and you get to meet tons of people. It may be somewhat difficult to live without your parents and in another city, but this makes you learn how to live your life better and how to appreciate what you have, like your parents and your belongings. Besides, you get to appreciate the things you achieve during your life because you learn that your goals are not achieved easily, but that they cost a lot of work and effort. In conclusion, being a foreign student is great!

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ESLbee

what I ask to do now is to read and rewrite them

JS