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JEDDAH FLOODS


zzzzzz The floods, are a persistent problem in Jeddah. And the reason of this negligence, are the contractors, so I think there are several solutions to this prpblem.

zzzzzz First of all, the government should not give the contractors
the full authority to mange the projects. Because, there
are many tunnels created by them were not compatible with
international standars. Also, we can see the evidence every
day in our streets.

zzzzzzz Second things, that is to allow the foreign companise to do the local projects. In addition, there is an agreement between that company and our government, also there is a time limit for ending project.

zzzzzzzz Finally, we should reconsider the level of the contractors who will manage the project in our country. Furthermore, our government should create an Auditors to reduce froud.

zzzzzzz Aresult of these proposals, all citizens will enjoy in happy life with best services in all cities of our country. Also they will not fare of flooding, that we dont know when it will be ends.



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