مايش رأيكم في الرايتنق حقي ؟؟؟

[Dr.Passed]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة abdu2010 انا اللي معليش تعبتكم معايا والله انكم طيبييييين خذي راحتك انا في الانتظار

كيف تبغاني اساعدك؟ ايش الي تبغا تغيرو؟ معليش وضح المطلوب

[ABDU2010]

Jeddah is the second largest city after Riyadh, it is the main port of the Kingdom on the Red Sea and main gate through which most of the pilgrims arrive by air and sea to perform Umrah, Haj or to visit the two holy mosques. Area inhabited is more than 1,500 km, and population is more than one and half million. Jeddah is an industrial and active commercial center, with modern features, squares and courtyards. It is an important tourism center, with an eighty kilometer long beautiful corniche on the Red Sea coast. Jeddah also comprises the King Abdul Aziz University, King Abdul Aziz International Airport and Jeddah Islamic Port. King Fahd Fountain is located inside the Red Sea, near the coast, is an outstanding feature of the port of Jeddah particularly during the night when it sends beautiful colored water up to two hundred and sixty meters.


اول شيء تقييمك للموضوع
هذا موضوع ناقص الخاتمة ابغى اقسم على برقرافين مقدمة ومحتوى وبعدين تزيدي من عندك الخاتمة

[ABDU2010]

يعني احذف منو وازيد سلبيات عن جدة

[Dr.Passed]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة !..rahooofa..! معليش انا كتبت التعبير وماشوفتك يادكتورة *_^ حنزل موضوعي واختار الاحسن .. There are many great sports around the world , but for me , football is the best . It has many basic rules , for example , there should be two teams playing against each other . Each team must has eleven players . The time of the mach is 90 minutes and some times it takes more if they got an even scores . Football is very popular sport in saudi arabia . My favorite team here is ittihad , but my favorite international team is real madrid . In saudi arabia , there are a lot of great players such as majed abdullah , sami al-jaber and yousef al-thinian . I looked up to them since i was 10 . I spent most of my free time back then playing football , that's why i play very well right now . However , football can be very dangerous some times . There are a lot of players who got injured because of it and unfortunately they never got the chance to play again . Inspite all of that , i love football very much and i advise everyone to try it

ليه ازعل ياقلبي.....بالعكس

[ووجدداان]

اوكي استاذن مع السلامه وبتوفيق للكل

[علي,ع]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ووجدداان Jeddah is the gateway to the holy cities of Makkah and Madinah. Although Riyadh is the capital of the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, Jeddah is known as its commercial capital. Since Jeddah is situated at the Red Sea coast, it is also known as Bride of Red Sea هادي المقدمه احسها ارتب شوي ايش رايك ؟؟ وبعدها المحتوى من موضعك والخاتمه .. بس كيف هادي دحين؟

اختي وجدان
الرياض هنا ماله داعي تذكرينها
Jeddah is known as the commerical capital وكمان
Jeddah is located at the red sea coast وكمان
It also known as the bridge of the red sea

[Dr.Passed]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة abdu2010 jeddah is the second largest city after riyadh, it is the main port of the kingdom on the red sea and main gate through which most of the pilgrims arrive by air and sea to perform umrah, haj or to visit the two holy mosques. Area inhabited is more than 1,500 km, and population is more than one and half million. Jeddah is an industrial and active commercial center, with modern features, squares and courtyards. It is an important tourism center, with an eighty kilometer long beautiful corniche on the red sea coast. Jeddah also comprises the king abdul aziz university, king abdul aziz international airport and jeddah islamic port. King fahd fountain is located inside the red sea, near the coast, is an outstanding feature of the port of jeddah particularly during the night when it sends beautiful colored water up to two hundred and sixty meters. اول شيء تقييمك للموضوع هذا موضوع ناقص الخاتمة ابغى اقسم على برقرافين مقدمة ومحتوى وبعدين تزيدي من عندك الخاتمة

طيب دحين اشتغلك عليه
شكلي حسهر على حس امتحانكم بكره هههههه<<<امزح

[ABDU2010]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ووجدداان jeddah is the gateway to the holy cities of makkah and madinah. Although riyadh is the capital of the kingdom of saudi arabia, jeddah is known as its commercial capital. Since jeddah is situated at the red sea coast, it is also known as bride of red sea هادي المقدمه احسها ارتب شوي ايش رايك ؟؟ وبعدها المحتوى من موضعك والخاتمه .. بس كيف هادي دحين؟

بس ما تلاحظي انها طويلة شويه والمحتوى برضو طويل يعني انا اقول اخلي المقدمه سطرين بعدين المحتوى اكبر شي عن الابجابيات والسلبيات في جدة وبعدين الخاتمة سطرين وكلها تكون 150 كلمة

[ABDU2010]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ووجدداان اوكي استاذن مع السلامه وبتوفيق للكل

معليش يا وجدان سهرتك معايا بكرة في القاعة تنامي وتدعي عليا
ما قصرتي معايا في ميزان حسناتك ان شاء الله ونردلك الجميل ان شاء الله

[Dr.selly]

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الصراحه الله يعطيك الف عافيه
والله بدعيلك من قلبي

ماشاء الله استفدت كثييير من ردودك

الله يديمك على فعل الخير خيتو

احلى تحيه لك ^^