A new idea for new students in English section

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن encredable amazing wonderful idea I like this topic is the best because you can explain what you have in your hart to someone I will start now but tomorrow I will copy here but captain raghde I want to see your dreams in your last idea . we like to see your dreams what are their color second : at the last topic please please please [COLOR="SeaGreen"]you must began [/COLOR you to writ your emotions heeeeeeeeeeeere when you write your litters I writ my litter challenge :) ^_*

The blue color is the mistakes that I corrected

I accepet the challenge

[رغد محمد]

My dream......

My dream is to go by myself to remote island has no human beings and curl for a month.....
Just so cut off from this corrupt world .....even see the sky so dark observing the bright stars in the day....
and .....
I ask Allah to erase my sins and forgive me .

Unfortunatelly, I didn’t reach my dream to this day ,or even Approached it .Perhaps my fears that prevents me from achieved.


Remember members:
The topic of the day is write to someone you care about

See you soon

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

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My dream......

My dream is to go by myself to remote island has no human beings and curl for a month.....
Just so cut off from this corrupt world .....even see the sky so dark observing the bright stars in the day....
and .....
I ask Allah to erase my sins and forgive me .

Unfortunatelly, I didn’t reach my dream to this day ,or even Approached it .Perhaps my fears that prevents me from achieved.[/SIZE




In fact, I cannot describe my feeling when I finish reading this words


a beautiful dream





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sorry I cannot expression

no comment

[Suzi]

Haio ..........good evening every buddy

Regarding to your topic ,this is my respons

Since I've graduated from high school my dream is to join

a famous college which provides a british curriculum but there

there havn't been chance yet .every day it rise more and more
how ever ,I believe one day I wil achieve it

my dream is more than which you imagin it concentrates in my

skills and ambitions and one day it will accomplished


but more than it I strictly hope to meet my brother in green paradise

and spread the most beautifull day with missed brother at

paradise

see ya

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Suzi Haio ..........good evening every buddy Regarding to your topic ,this is my respons Since I've graduated from high school my dream is to join a famous college which provides a british curriculum but there there havn't been chance yet .every day it rise more and more how ever ,I believe one day I wil achieve it my dream is more than which you imagin it concentrates in my skills and ambitions and one day it will accomplished but more than it I strictly hope to meet my brother in green paradise and spread the most beautifull day with missed brother at paradise see ya

Ohh ,my dear you made me cry I’m so so sorry for your lost.
Your dream is beautifull...... Allah please ...please ..please make her dream come true
Allah have mercy on your brother....
Masha’allah I couldn’t find a mistakes.
Allah bless you my dear suzi

[رغد محمد]

Remember every buddy the topic of the day is


write to somaone you care about
I’m waiting for a beautifull responses

[Conscientious]

Wonderful topic masha'aAllah

My dear parents , day after day , I feel that we are one soul which can be separated . Since I was a baby , and once I open my eyes, I found myself attaching to you . 20 years and more I have spend them with you under one roof , we spend happy and sad moments together .May Allah protect you for me and reward you for all the things that u have done for my sake ." I know that I can never ever pay for all the debts u lent me in my days ". May Allah gather us also in the Paradise with our prophet Muhammad peace be upon him

[رجلُ من سفَر]

Peace and mercy upon you

I thank you brother for this amazing topic

Let me apologize for the punctuation problem in this forum

And welcome all our friends in this section

Actually I have no idea what I will tell you in this reply

But I am in habit of writing about my feelings, my fear, and

my memories

So, here I am trying to write about "the journey of the hope"

………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Like a yellow ear that dance with the wind next to the sunset

He sat there, with his foot dangle above the ocean, and asked

the ocean

How many ship didn't arrive and won't arrive

Gave a long gaze at the sky and said
:
When I was a child, I idolize this live
,
I was laden with pink dreams

I searched in all places for my existence, lies
,
And my voice that went and wasn't echoed back

Everybody in this live will get handful of dreams or lies

And take them with him everywhere

then disappear in an abandoned lane

later, the lane will echo with his shouts
:
Where am I
?
They told me that I can do it

They said I will survive

Then he will calm

And walk three steps towards
,
Then guess what .. ! he will get out from his dark lane

And find himself here, on this stranger beach

Oooooooooooooh ocean

Were we all under the illusion

Which secret are you keep from us

Why were we all limping when we cross the abandoned lanes

Is it our fate, choice, kindness

That lead us to this dead end lanes…again and again

Should we be haggled even for our dreams

and now you have a great chance to lament yourself, and let

your memories hang over the ocean

The old man turn round with his back to the ocean and leave

his footprint on the beach

These footprint won't fade away ….ever … ever

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تحية,

[حلاها زايد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن I thing that the best dream in all dreams of classmates it is a noble goal after to day you make my respect you than other time I wish you success

thank you abdullah and your writing is wonderful masha'aAllah
and your job helps you to develop your language
try to exercise any word you learn in your job

[حلاها زايد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw your English is very good Masha’allah even better than me .Keep going my dear. I have one note: When you write the conscience (I) you should write it with a capital letter. Allah bless you

thank you for encourage to me but I don't think I am better than you really
you are wonderful masha'aAlla
and thank you for this advice I'm going to work it
I wish you success and happiness