the (perfect essay writing) competition

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy tell u what Con. try to get red of complexity let'm do whatever they want then u & I will be in trouble hh coz all of them are very good in E .. & to be very honest I'm already afraid of doing this to such good students. I guarantee they're doing much better than me !

Make it complex !!

[الملاك الأبيض]

no English boy I'm not that perfect in English ,other wise i won't be here to learn . there is no one perfect cuz the education companion us till the death .

umm i was so busy today but thank god i had finish my assignment peacefully


ooh I'm happy looks like I'm the first one who finished her assignment lol this is very excited ,i hope I'm not the worst :(

o.k. teachers this is my topic i hope u like it and please go easy on me:27:

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الملاك الأبيض no English boy I'm not that perfect in English ,other wise i won't be here to learn . there is no one perfect cuz the education companion us till the death . umm i was so busy today but thank god i had finish my assignment peacefully ooh I'm happy looks like I'm the first one who finished her assignment lol this is very excited ,i hope I'm not the worst :( o.k. teachers this is my topic i hope u like it and please go easy on me:27:

well done indeeed

[English boy]

I will give u my comments tomorrow! I have to go now..

[MS.Fabulous]

sorry i am late still left 10 minutes
this is my essay
sorry i was exteremely
busy

[MS.Fabulous]

suzi
??where are you
Ragad can n't join us
Alfata
i think he is busy

[MS.Fabulous]

English boy
con
please when both of you are finish
open a subject with the results
and announce the winner with
your notes or send it to me and i will open the subject
thank you so much
^_^

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الملاك الأبيض no English boy I'm not that perfect in English ,other wise i won't be here to learn . there is no one perfect cuz the education companion us till the death . umm i was so busy today but thank god i had finish my assignment peacefully ooh I'm happy looks like I'm the first one who finished her assignment lol this is very excited ,i hope I'm not the worst :( o.k. teachers this is my topic i hope u like it and please go easy on me:27:

thank you malak good luck

[MS.Fabulous]

i think that my essay is very short

[Conscientious]

I will correct ur essay guys when u agree on one topic and one type of essay otherwise i can's just correct it randomly

i can only correct according to what i learned from my instructors at university , i can't just invent a new way of correction and then wrong members by choosing the winner

And to be frank , i know that English boy have not studied these types of the essays in the university because boys section is different from ours so he may not be able to correct following the same rules of comparison and contrast essay , that's why i don't blame him :)a

so what i'm saying , i prefer that English boy will be the judge of this stage coz it's like a free writing

and i'll be for the next stage which won't be free (one topic , one type)a

and we will be together for the final stage

what do u think English boy ?